Prompt By http://thesecretkeeper.net/2016/03/14/weekly-writing-prompt-28/
Tanka (5 – 7 – 5 – 7 – 7)
Words: | WAVE | COOL| PREVENT | BRIGHT | WATCH |
I’m not cool, I’m cold
Wave of love makes me colder
Your eyes watch me “cool”
Your goodness stares my brightness
Truth is! I prevent Living!!!
Life is all about PAIN !! 
An excellent weaving together of the words into a very good tanka. Very good! 😉
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Is it good ?
U kno! I can’t write in a limit. Jus tried :p
I don’t write better than u do Jonathan.
I m just a sibling
Thankyou so much : )
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Oh my, Jyotee, you are such a beautiful person and far more talented! You humble me with your kind words… All the very best to you w/blessings! 🙂
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:p
Thank you so much dear one!
Diff topics today :p
Haha
Kep smiln : ))
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Mind
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Reblogged this on Still Another Writer's Blog.
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Thank you so much!!
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
GOOD USING OF THOSE PROMPT WORDS. TIME TO LIVE, GIRL…OR WHOEVER IS TALKING! Is life truly only pain?
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It is! All about PAIN ….
Thank you so much!!! Jonathan for stopping by
: ))
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Good effort…fine result. By the way, I’m another Jonathan to add to your collection! One operates at whatever light one has…increasing in skills as we go. THAT’S for all of us here! Thanks for your “follow” of my blog, too. Good to make your acquaintance. I’ll just see what other goodies you have here! 🙂
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Haha
Dats ryt! I ve a sweet mate named Jonathan : p and u too r :p
Thankyou so much for appreciating my work!
I read ur last poem : )) dat was awesom #hope
It feels so good having soooo creative n poetic mates here in wordpres!
Its realy inspiring!
Thanks!
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We’re all off a kind…yet each is different! I like the name of Jonathan…but I (and MY wife!) am biased1
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Reblogged this on ' Ace Friends News ' and commented:
First of all l would like to thank you for visiting my news and so many likes it is so appreciated thought this tanka would be great for sharing with friends .. Ian 😀
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Thank you so much Ian : ))
Thank you so much for keeping us updated and diff news : ))
Gday
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Beautiful composition of words..love reading it👌😊
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Thank you so much!
Prashantt
: ))
Gday
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Good use of the words. Evoked sadness for me. Good tanka.:)
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Thank you so much Susan.
I saw ur poem at kiley’s blog. #challenge
U write amazing!!!!
: ))
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Welcome and once again thanks for following .. Ian
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Thank you for the compliment. 🙂
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Ohh! This is short yet fierce! 😀
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thankyou dear
: ))
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My pleasure! 😀
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cute and lovely poem dear
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Thank you so much anagha :p
for taking tym to read
: ))
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its my pleasure….your blog is lovely….I am on my way exploring it…
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Thank you so much!!!
I just checked urs too!
u write so beautifully !
particularly abt love n frendsips n d photography!
: ))
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oh thank you….and I am flying …..
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: ))
nyc meeting u anagha
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i feel more than honored to meet you….you have such a lovely blog
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thankyou so much Mate
: ))
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Also I write tanka, haiku, renga, Keiryu, choka, I love poetry in Japanese Metrics…!hola!
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Dats great!!!
U write so muchh things 🙂
looking ur posts
Thnaks for stoppin by viki
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Awesome.
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dhanyavad sagar ; ))
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Aapka Bahu-Bahut Shukriya Jyotee ji.
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jyotee*
only
pls
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Kyun?n Pls Na Boliye.
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bcz I m a norml grl n love being cald by my norml name sagar ji
; ))
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Well But ‘Ji’ is for Respect,Specialy for Female.Mom ne kaha tha Female ka naam Always Izzat se lena,Jyotee ji.
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except me then ;))
thank you sagar
gday
; ))
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Thanks U Jyotee ji,Have a Nice Day.
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