If I were doomed in loneliness,
Again! How would I describe all my isolations, I would
innocent abandonees Kill the
myself Life is nothing but a All the pain loneliness
prove say struggle I’ve been with a
And them And through. Sword
court heard everyone I m pretty sure with a
to the I have must My lord! knife
to go Because struggle!! Has that with a
have through goes being human pain cutter
Might And
court to me drags definitely Loneliness . Murderer a be
It reads like it purrs….
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haha
is dat so??
Thankyou for stopping by :p
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Oh. interesting poetic technique!
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Yeah – like a Big Tiger has eaten a swimparty and found his supper and his breakfast at a Beverley Hills address where they make a movie and decide to call it….”The End of the World for Feline Days are Numbered!” (The day the cats disappear is the day we all start to die)
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very interesting explanation!!!
Thankyou so much Mate : )) for ur lovely words.
have a gud day ahead : ))
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thankyou so much! Rose
: ))
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It was nice meeting you. 🙂 See you around?
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same here Rose.
: ))
I saw ur posts. They are so so so good. : ))
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Just like yours! 😀 😀 😀
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You too, Namaste
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Namaste!!! Bruce
; ))
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Very interesting – it’s hard to which thread to follow. Or are they different eddies in a whirlpool, since it is named “Life’s Spiral”? The overall effect is great.
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Thank you so muchh trent :p
yeah! Its a spiral. if u r watching on a big screen. its easier :p
I ve been reading ur posts and smileys as well :p Thanks for stopping by dear.
have a nyc day ; ))
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Once again you have come up with an interesting – I correct: intriguing – concept which, as it were, puts the finger in the already salted wound. Or is it rather the words, independently of the concept, of the structure? Regardless, the sore, salted flesh makes the sufferer hungry, hungrier for that which cuts them so deeply, right to the bone. Sometimes someone’s finger in one’s open wounds feels better than to suffer less but alone. Do wearing and bearing one’s pain go hand in hand, though?
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Thank you so much for the follow! I like your experimentation with the form: it echoes the unstructured layers of pain. 🙂
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Thank you so much Ich bin das Wort ist ich for stopping by.( is this ur name?; I never asked u :p though I ve been talking to u since first post ;d )
Wat I would say Is –
pain is pain
pain pains lot
No matter how deep
Cut is cut!
I agree with u sayin dat
sore salted flesh makes the sufferer hungrier n cuts deeper.
Once u r in the habit of isolations and griefs; Truth is u never come out of it.
I dont mean all rest people r having easy lives! I don’t kno; may b depends on perceptions n strengths of an individual.
Namaste!
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Thank you too Padma : )) for stopping by n commenting:)
All d best! Gday
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💐💐💐
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Good Morning Marine
: ))
🌹
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I hope u like the dedication in Reblogged 💐💐💐
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Beautiful and Brilliant! I love you unique, talented style! 🙂
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Thankyou so much for dedication Marine
: ))
And flowers :p
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so sweet of u Jonathan : ))
Thanks!
goodmorning
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Welcome 💐🌷🌷🌹🌹💐
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Honestly, I am not able to read much. 😦
Is there a technique that I need to follow???
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The way you arranged the text made this really great. It was like a puzzle and poem combo 🙂
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nice one! meaningful in a disorientating way.
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indeed yes! prasenjit
in big screen; starting from if..
follow the spiral. until the last word.. struggle!!
thankyou for stopping by prasenjit
gday
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Thank you so muchh!
yeah: )) it more looks like a puzzle :p
gday
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Thank you so much dear
: ))
gday
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word formations cut through my veins like a wicked knife meant for eviscerating dinner…
i love it, muahaha. 💉
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I saw : p ur post are more;
colorful
beautiful
emoful
animationsful &
delicious!!!!! :p
Thank you so much for stopping by Xeno (if dats ur name) ;p
g’day
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Reblogged this on ' Ace Friends News ' and commented:
Nice post thanks for sharing with friends … Ian
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Thank you so muchh Ian
Gday
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😀 thx, a pleasure visiting.
be seeing ya ^^
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Like a multifaceted diamond!
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Thank you so muchh Dajena!
: ))
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You are welcome Anita 😀
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haha
Jyotee ; ))
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I am sorry 😦
Jyotee!!
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n who’s anita?
:p
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I thought, you had signed your name Anita in an earlier comment of yours, but I am truly sorry for being mistaken.
Jyotee – I will not forget it now 🙂
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;p
yah! To Charly. once!
He doent remember though!
hehe
gday dear one 😉
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Ahh, so i wasn’t dreaming 😉
Be well my dear! 🙂
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It is what it is because the pain of life brings relief ? Twisted ! ; )
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Thats true in one way!!!
Thankyou for the beautiful comment
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Thank you ! There are many ways to read a poem, hey ? ; )
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Wonderful writing. Not sure if its intentionally written in that order .. I mean indentation
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Thankyou so muchh theonlysup (is dat ur nme? sry)
yeah! it’s just a way of wtiting.
more to explore!
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I’m Suprith. Ur writing moves my soul.
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thanks! suprith for encouraging me.
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I’m just concentrating at ur blog tagline at the moment.. What made u write that.
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Thank you for following me and I love how creative you are and the wonderful posts. I’ll be back to read more of it!!
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Thank you so muchh kally!
I m nothing!
ur topics n writings are like some wonderlands 😉
gday
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Lovely Jyotee ji.
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😔
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: )
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‘Who wants to be regular, when you can be unique!’ 😉 Beautifully written! I loved your style of writing! 🙂
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Thank you so much for ur support!
I appreciate ur presence here!
Have a grt day
Stay blessed
–Jyotee
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Thank you so much lovely.
U r jus tooo kind n sweet
Take care
Gday
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Most welcome! 🙂
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Love your blog check out mine & follow please Young Journey –
https://youngjourneysite.wordpress.com/
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Hello my wp friend : )
you have a lovely blog!
glad to come across your beautiful work!
: )
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Awh thank you so much !!!
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