Yes!
Not to
decide is
one decision.
Decide to decide
is another decision.
Blowing wind never
decides its directions!
have you heard ever that
flowing river decides not to flow!
People are bounded wherever lie!
Bonds don’t decide decisions!
Its all about time and time
Even the time doesn’t
decide its timings
Then who are
you and me
to decide
what to
decide.
March 27-2016-4:22pm
Location:Nepal
Excellent and lovely presentation.
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you’e some talent. 🙂
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Oh! Your words made a lot of sense! I cannot help but agree!
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Impressive 🙂
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Thank you so muchh Dhiraj
; ))
good evenin ahead
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Thank you so muchhh prasenjit ; ))
keep smiln
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Thanks! a tonnnssss Rose ; ))
good evenin
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Thank you stranger:!
lots of misses ;p
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Love this. Well expressed and precise.
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Thank you so muchhh @The lonly Auther ( sorry! idk ur nme n its okk if u don’t wanna tell. I understn)
thanks for stopping by
;))
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🙂
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Pleasure:)
Very Good Evening to you too
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I like the wave concept – or perhaps it is a rising tide?
There are some grammatical sticking points though, if I may point them out:
Line five should read either, ‘To decide to decide’, or ‘Deciding to decide’. (to-infinitve or gerund)
Line seven should read, ‘A blowing wind’. (indefinite article)
Line nine should read, ‘Have you ever heard that’. (word order)
Line ten should read, ‘A flowing river’. (indefinite article)
I am not quite sure what line eleven is supposed to mean, but I suppose it should read, ‘People are bound wherever they lie’. (bind – bound – bound)
Line twelve should read, ‘Bonds don’t make decisions’. (make a decision)
Line thirteen should read, ‘It’s all about time and time’. (apostrophe)
Line fourteen should read, ‘Even time doesn’t’. (no article)
Line seventeen should read, ‘You and I’. (nominative)
But then again, who am I to decide this? 😀
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yeah!
exactly!
Thank you so muchh ich bin wort ist ich
as usual! Thankyou for catching my errors!
I admit! I m not so good with words ;p
plus I become blind; deaf; lame; n handicapd! while I write suddnly!
Hope the intension n emotions remain same!
thanks a dozen! I will take care of this ;p
Good evenin ahead!
thank you so muchhhh!
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You are very welcome. If I can be of any help, I shall do it gladly. 🙂
Besides, I do think you are good with words, the way you combine them to expressions is excellent; grammatical errors are a different topic altogether. I just thought it would help your reputation with potential new readers.
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Thank you so muchh!
yeah! Better n bettr everyday! ;p
Actually I cut some words to maintain the wave!
bcoz wat I alwz think is; poems are output of emotions n it is an art definitely.
Though I m jus a sibling! ;p
Have to learn so muchhhhh;p
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Love this!!
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Thank you so much Brenda! for stoppin by n taking tym to read !
good evenin ahead ; ))
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I am so sorry. I always make the mistake of thinking everyone knows my name. It’s Andrew. This was a good write.
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;D
may b bcoz I m New to WP ;p
yah! will rembr Andrew..though I see ur posts daily ;p
Thank you so much!
; ))
Thanks for appreciating ! Not better than u! ; ))
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Thank you for your kind words. Have a great day
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8:50 pm ;p here
good nyt Andrew!
; ))
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Good night.
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This is beautiful and full of meaning, Nepali Girl 🙂
I hope I will visit you one day 😀
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Thank you so much Mopana
; ))
pls do visit! Nepal is a beautiful country n I believe u r gonnna love ; ))
have a gr8 tym ahead mopana
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Hey! What’s your name?
Mine is Monica 😀
I know you have a beautiful country, that’s why I want to visit you :))
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Jyotee
Nyc knowing u here Monica
; ))
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❤
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Great piece 🙂
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Thank you so muchh @lionAroundWriting
have a gr8 day ahead n
thanks for stoppin by : ))
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It’s really impressive!
I’m becoming a fan of yours 😄
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Impressive!!
Ur really gud at grammar 🙂
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Thank you! My only purpose here was to help as best I could. 🙂
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wow. inspires thought.
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Thank you so muchhh dear ; ))
gday
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thank you so much dear one!
gday
; ))
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hehe
is dat so Yousuf? or was a satire ;p
anyways! not bad also
hehe
Thanks dear for stopping by
gday
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I m already urs “;p
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Welcome
N hahaha…. no Jyotee, I just loved his work so I thought it wud be nyc to praise a little bit. Thats all ;p 🙂
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Me gusto
Enviado desde mi iPhone
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Thank you so muchhh
I guess that’s something nice!
;p
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This is so good! Well written 🙂
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sublime !
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Amazing! 😍😊
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thanks Nitin
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thank you pratishtha
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I love it. You have a talent. Keep writing! 🙂
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It’s so cool how you made this shape with your poem too! 🙂
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Thank you so muchh Tony
; ))
hav a gr8 day
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Thank you so muchh Isabrlla
for encouraging n taking tym to read
gday
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Siiiiii
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This was wonderful! Fun and provoking.
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you’re welcome. 🙂
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thank you so muchh virchuchutrain
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Thanks for signing up to follow my blog and diet, exercise and living longer. I hope you find it useful. I like the way you use words and set them out. Very poetic!
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Thank you too so muchh Tony!
Gday ahead
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God bless you always 💐💐💐
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Thank you so much dear!
hav a gr8 day ahead
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Thank u 💐💐💐💐
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myn pleasures all ; ))
🌹
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Behtreen Dilkash.
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thank you so muchh dilkas
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Most Welcome.
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omg!
u were supposd to b sleepin
r u not at india
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In India.Your Name?If U don’t Mind.
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Love this and the title is perfect. God bless you.
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Nice going—physical, audial, as well as that shapely visual 🙂
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thank you so muchh Sherron
gdmornin
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jyotee
n urs
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Reblogged this on Still Another Writer's Blog.
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thank you so muchh Grandtrines
gday ahead ; ))
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Fine.’Sagar’
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You are being nominated for a blogger tag.
http://wp.me/p7jcFD-2X
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Thankyou so muchh mahima ; ))
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You are welcome ☺
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Beautiful… and the question pops up: Then who decides if not time?
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exactly!
thank you so muchh dear for stoppin by
:))
gday
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Muy cierto elegir el camino adecuado sin duda es tu responsabilidad
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Thank you so much!
Hope dats somethin good. looks like spanish though : ))
gday
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A ti preciosa
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: ))
Stay blessed . Thankyou
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nice 🙂
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The blog name intrigued but decidability decided that I decidedly should leave comment on huv much I enjoyed.
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Thank you so much Mayan
gday
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great!
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Thanks dear
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Hey!!
Loved this !
When we actually give it a thought, it is at times better to go with the flow than be adamant with our decisions.
Very well written and expressed.
Thank you so much for the follow!
Very glad to have met you too and I would be more than just happy to hear from you on my blog too!
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Thank you so much dear one for stopping by n takin tym to read.
Thanks for ur kind words n encouragement!
Goin towards ur blog:p
good evenin ahead : ))
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You don’t have to thank me for it was an absolute pleasure visiting your blog.^_^
You too have a great evening ahead💕
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Reblogged this on unstilledheart.
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Thank you = Dhanyavaad
My= mero
Friend=Sathi
English=Nepali
He he
: ))
Smile!
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🙂
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Reblogged this on Truth Troubles: Why people hate the truths' of the real world.
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Dhanyavaad!
: )
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thanks
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