I am torn.
I am cut.
I am ripped.
Deeply from my roots.
Never to
Be lived
again!
I flow down. I blow down!
Down and
Down.
Struggle for
The existence
That existed someday into someone’s
Existence.
Zombies are coming!
The carbon,
Methane CFCs
Those beasts! Though the struggle continues.
Alas! That cold
Wall, Ouch!
Itchy dry woods!
Rippers dragged me hither and thither!
yet struggling!
struggling to be dead
struggling to be un-dead
Until and unless
Struggle starts
Struggling!
Oh lord! Who decides my fate! Is it me????
Beautiful and such wonderful presentation.
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Excellent … from beginning to end. Very sharp with good, substantive observations and questions in such wonderful poetic flow! 🙂
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This was so good.
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Awesome! 😍
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aww
thank you so muchh dhiraj!
it is just a piece of shittt!
:)))
gud evenin ahead
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So Nice Jyotee ji. Deep Feelings in Very Young Age??
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Thank you so much dear!
I kno Its not good 😦
I saw a piece of paper falling down from 5th floor n tried to illustrate wat wud a piece of paper think! if it had a mind; a body:p
Thank you for stopping by Jonathan!
gr8 day ahead
; ))
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Thank you so much Andrew!
for encouraging n stopping by
gday ahead
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Thank you sweetie!
:))
gdevenin ahead
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Thank you so muchh Sagar ji.
I actually feel shy n strange wen u say jyotee ji.
haha
Thanks for taking tym to read.
gd evenin ahead
; ))
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Same to u babe😊
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Thanks. Have a great day.
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Pleasure:)
Very Good Evening to you too.
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Nice one. :))
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wonderfully penned.. That falling paper comes to my imagination.
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:p
Thank you so much akhila
gud day ahead
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Dhanyavaad Srijan
have nyc evenin
;))
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Really great writing, was very illustrative and deep, great work! 🙂
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Thank you so much Shri for ur kind words n for taking tym to read
:))
gday ahead
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Thank you so much, have a great day 🙂
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Don’t Be Shy,U R Great Jyotee ji.
Hindi Aati hai Aapko?
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yes, you are deciding it! make it a good one 🙂
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It is wonderful to hear that! Thank you for sharing! 😀 ❤
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Thank you so much zoiezoology.
good morning to u
:))
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Striking from the word go
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yeah : ))
Thank you so much Dagmar
for taking tym to read n
have a gr8 day ahead
: ))
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Good morning to you as well! 😁 even though it’s the afternoon… 😂
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Thank you so muchh Saaransh
good mornin n gday!
: ))
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you too 🙂
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😀
oh my god! so much difference.
Earth is a strange planet :p
good afternoon!
:))
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Reblogged this on unstilledheart.
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Yep! Lol! 😂
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Thank you so much Paul
:))
gday ahead
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Thank you so muchh
@unstilledheart
hav a nyc day!
: ))
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You too, you do know who I am I believe. My B site
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I do : ))
for sure!
and u do for sure!
dat I do : ))
no?
:p
(smile)
takecare
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I think it is definitely you who decides your fate. xo
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Indeed!
Thank you for stoppin by
Gday
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Awesome!!
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I don’t think I have ever seen your name listed on your site. Plus your imagery is interesting. Do you do it in the editor breaking the it into the 3 sections and allow it to flow that way or some other way?
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: ))
Truth is I write only wen I m terrible n unable to handle myself.
And abt the flows; I m unaware of it always. I keep writin n it becomes something n something. even I cnt understan at dat point.
I don’t kno wat to say : ))
Ur name starts with P. No?
I kno! It does : ))
stay blessed!
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Thank you so much Bling
hav a gr8 day
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Yes, I am a fan of your writing. Keep doing it until you are done with it.
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Thank you so much Binu : ))
Thanks for liking and encouraging mate!
stay blessed
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Really excellent. fate is time, time is an ocean. See what swims in time, the swirls they make. What fates? A swirl, and the way it spins us. Can you feel the gravity of its curve, The heaviness of its contemplations? Of course we can.
I do not contemplate the angle of the turn, but the storm body of dual being as two. Swirls, bubbles— when you see this, well…. how beautiful are such things, regardless of their fates.. we only contain for a time what is. Sorry for the long comment, kinda flowed after reading your nice post. thanks -J
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: ))
Thank you so much dear for such wonderful words.
Yeah! Tym is most powerful thing, I believe that.
And fate! I m not sure!
No fate in fates anymore. Yeah. The existence-exists n applies universally for all breathful n breath-less things!
Thankyou for encouraging me n giving a HOPE
; ))
Stay Loved
Gday
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yes, hehe. just to clarify, an ocean is an ocean— not fate. though, the fish in the sea always ponder their date. see ya mate =D
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:p
hehe
How deep
looks like
fish n fate
lack frensip
yah! until next post
c u sooon “Dost”
: ))
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Beautifully pen poetic thought,love the way of end asking question ahead!!awesome work 👌👌👏
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Thank you so much Prashantt!
gday
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Yes it does start with P;)
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What I love about your blog is how wonderfully you present your posts!!! 🙂
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Thankyou so muchh Aisjwarya
: ))
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Actually I wanted to comment on the post, ‘Happy Birthday Dada’ but there was no comment option so I am doing it here . This post is beautiful too but the previous post just connected to my heart.
By Dada you mean your brother, right?
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pleasure 🙂
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all of the above
(you, in hand with it, and everything else. sometimes i think that what we are is the sum of each and everything which has touched us)
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Very well written. You do have great presentation to it.
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Of course its you. Be brave..
Peace and blessing!
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Thanks! Daksi
gday ahead
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gritty poetry – love the shape of the poem! your feelings are deep
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Thankyou so muchh
@dragonscaleclippings
hav a gr8 day ahead
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Thankyou so muchhh
for encouraging me.
@Wordsmith
gr8 day ahead : ))
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yeah exactly :p
Thank you so muchh betunada
stay blessed
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Dat was an emotional post. so I closed the comments
Dat was for my Dad.
Thankyou so much for wishes n for stoppin by
hav a gr8 day ahead : ))
stay blessed
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😊
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I love this
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Thank you nimis
You hav a wonderful blog. loved so muchhh
gday
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*nimit heh. Thankyou, you too
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oho
srry
hehe
nimit
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Oii, life is not all about PAIN, life’s beautiful. And why isolated??
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I m searching answers yet
hehe
thanks for stoppin by Nimit
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An interesting metaphor from the point of view of an inanimate object Jyotee,
Have a good day!
Dajena 🙂
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Thankyou so muchh Dajena :p
hope u r doin wel :))
lots of love
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xx you are welcome!
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I loved it! What a wonderful read! 😄
Happy to connect ❤
Do check out my writings too, will appreciate your reviews 🙌
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Yeah sure!
Thank you so much dear
Gday ahead
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How do I restore my computer to an earlier time?
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Pls go to control pannel.
then recovery
and choose ur restore point!
u will be restore to the previous or desired time.
let me kno if this works. thankyou for stopping by
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Just Wowww..👌
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