14th
July
1969.
Crosses
23:09pm
While eyes of mine
Gazing and staring deep
Into the homes of galaxies
Into the never-ending universe
Into the black-hole that engulfs
meteors and meteorites shower like rain
Could The sun be redder and more hotter
the Aliens stare onto the way as we pass by
Dear stars! My dear moon! Dear galaxies there!
Is it ditto as the glances we capture here
My psyche is already landing, where nothing exist!
No one exists! Except the existences!
Existence of gases! storms of high speeds!
dusts and thunders!! Hopefully!
My dear Earth! Stay safe! Stay alive
Until the day I’ ám back
And lay onto your lap again
Feeling lived again!
immense love
In the heart
And
soul!
Armstrong? of course! This is fun!
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Once again, brilliant! I love this poetic-historic remembrance! 🙂 Very well done!
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Thank you so muchh Jonathan!
For ur kind words n constant support
hav a wonderful day ahead : ))
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yes! ofcourse
Neil Armstrong!
Thankyou so much Bruice!
gr8 day ahead
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Had to Google to understand the relation. Impressive post 🙂
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: ))
No need to google!
Early mornin i read abt first persona to many fields….
and this poem is about….
How Neil Armstrom mite have spent the last nyt at his home…before actually goin to the space! To moon.
i imagined wat he mite hv thought…
Dats y date is 14th
Otherwise its 16th….
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I didn’t know about that too. :’)
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hehe
u donnt need to ;p
I got to explore so much abt astronomy today ;p
feelin hapy and the song abt neil. He passed just in 2012.
Astronomy is an amazing field
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Haha. I wish I could have born few centuries later when humans would have started exploring other galaxies :’)
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hahaha
dont wory! till then ur re-birth….. occurs for sure!
(i didnt say! In purans….ve heard, esp in Hinduism!)
Wow! u r talking here ;p
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Rebirth. Uh. I don’t require one round of this :p. Hahha. You are talking about space. I love anything related space. So I fight my laziness and put in extra effort to comment. 🙂
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: ))
Thanks! for dat R ;p
Everyone loves space! Is earth really bad??
:d
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Haha. To explain You love tea but doesn’t mean that you hate coffee. 🙂
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Yeah!
Interesting example ‘;p
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😊
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: )
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Thankyou so much for thinking of me n nominating me for this!
Feelin so hapy n encouraged.
thanks a lot
hav gr8 day ahead
: ))
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Sick (in a good way), berserk, off the hook. It’s easy to skip one of your posts, my eyes running down the page, where’s the post. But it’s worth looking for it. Jazzy, distinct. Like a meteor fam shower. Thanks.
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Thank you so muchh for stopping by n taking tym to read : p
ur kind words really motivate me!
thanks n gr8 day!
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No need to thank me, likely I should thank you for your support.
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This poem has a super interesting shape. It feels super cool reading it. Feel like I am in space… 🙂
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Thank you so much Isabella for ur kind n beautiful words
: ))
gday ahead
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great verse
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Thank you so much
: )
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Excelente
Enviado desde mi iPhone
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Feeling delighted to visit the space 🙂 Beautiful.
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Thank you Paul
; ))
Hav a nyc day
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Thank you so muchh gloriaarmit
; ))
gday ahead
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Thank you so muchh Fezaan ; ))
stay blessed
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Reblogged this on unstilledheart.
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Thank you dear
gday ; ))
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Bahut Khub.
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Dherai dherai Dhanyavaad
: )…
..
Suva-Diwas
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Sawagat hai Aapka Jyotee ji.
Aapko Bhi Shubh-Diwas.
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Jyotee ;(
Plsss
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This is brilliant!
Awesome 🙂
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thank you so much Srivi
Gd evening ahead
: ))
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A very nice evening to you too 🙂
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Masterly! It’s like gazing deep into galaxies:)
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Thank you so much for ur kind words Khaya
: ))
Gday ahead
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💐💐💐
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Loved your way of expression
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Thanks Gama (if dats us name)
Thanks for stopping by
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Observant and very intriguing …….loved the flair 🙂
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You’re welcome dear
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You’re welcome:)
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
SHE BLOWS OUR MINDS WITH HER SCOPE AND PRESENCE…OR LACK OF IT…WHILE SEARCHING OUT THE COSMOS!
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thank you so much Jonathan 🙂
Gday ahead
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EH MATE…YOU’RE THE BEST!
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Thanks for saying dat Jonathan
.
Smile
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history and poetry, wow!! You nailed Neil! 😀
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😀
Thanks Rosy : ))
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🙂
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my pleasure! Your concrete poems are awesome!
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🙂
Thanks sweety
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my pleasure! 🙂
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Thank you so much Saaransh
gr8 day ahead
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U2 have a grt day 🙂
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Brilliant!
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Thank you so much dear one : )
Stayloved
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My pleasure. 😀
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Awesome. For some reason I didn’t see the title, and I had a great aha moment once I’d finished reading 🙂
No one exists! Except the existences! < clever witty line.
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I nominated you for an award https://unstilledheart.wordpress.com/2016/04/05/the-liebster-award/
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Thanks dear!
: )
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Thank you so much for ur sweet words ; )
I’ve been reading ur poems!
U r an excellent poet !
Myn is just just ,,,,,,,,:p
Gday
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Very nice IG
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Thank you so much CT ; )
Gday
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Gday
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beautiful form and silky feel to the words…. I like this! very cool 🙂
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Thank you so much Debi for ur sweet words
: )
Namste
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you’re Welcome !!
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You’re welcome:)
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I have hit a lot of bad stuff recently and it keeps getting worse. I am speaking here instead of the other site. I have the award post in my queue and will do it either when I wake up from ODing from sleep meds or early tomorrow. By the way, I have too high of a tolerance to OD and injure myself. Just this crap with my sister got worse and I am not waiting 7 more hours to knock off.:)
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Ohhh dear!
Od means overdose? Omg!
Don’t do dat!
Everything will b fine. Tym will change. Don’t worry!
Hmm yah! Curious abt ur answers! :p
Stay fine dear : )
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Which answers? I have been out of it for a few days now. I have an award on my other site from you and am confused about what answers? Things are going from bad to worse. I am behind in bills, having money and other things taken or thrown out has not helped. Having chronic pain does not help, riding a bike and having issues finding work. My sister was going to illegally evict me, which I would fight and she would have to take time off work. so, I guess bc of that she is leaving it alone and planning to move ASAP and have me deal with the landlord. The electricity was in my sister’s name and I an a good 600 behind in bills and would need a good2-3k for a car and another 1000-1500 for a room and I have nothing coming in. Now if my sister moves out and the electricity is cut I do not know what will happen. But she said she is not dealing with me and I am toxic and she has severe mental issues and needs loads of therapy.
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I meant award ;p same. Okk leave it!
U hv got so many problems to deal with.
Human life is full of problems though.
Yeah! She needs that therapy. Any normal man won’t do this way otherwise!
Stay strong
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She actually called me toxic when I talk calm to her and she screams. Loses things, blames me at all hours and then oops you did not look here and not even an apology plus she re directs and is a bully. I have a call in to a show but I will get your award post in on my other site. I am so shot I thought the award post was on this one and it was in my spam folder to boot. Unless she starts writing down everyone’s url that leaves a comment it wouldn’t matter if I spoke to anyone on one of their posts. She and her bf are the have no life types that like solving things, which is noble and all but she could ask instead if being nasty.
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How weird is this! Interfering to other’s life this way.
They have no ryt to do this!
Its more like a torture than pain
People r crazy. Don’t kno! Y they don’t keep peace even in family. I m so shocked n worried for u.
Hard tym; u r going thru is! And bcoz of sis! Alas! She shud b loving u millions 😦
And also her bf OMG!
It is better to live alone in peace once u get thru all those things and find a job (at least not like the current-14;000 words n loads + less payment)
Okk! C u tomorrow then!
Ours is morning!
There must b nyt :p
Gudnyt to u dear
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She is also a bad assumer and all she says is right. Goes through my hamper and says I stole a towel. I had the receipt for it and said I shop at bed bath and beyond too. She has gone through my things. I had an accident so bad I still have yet to recover and she is a royal pain and my being on any medication must mean I am drunk. I am treated like some evil person and was called toxic earlier. Her and her bf are and I am always nice, monotone and she screams over the smallest things.
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Wow. i read yesterday they find a black hole 17 billion times bigger than sun. I cant imagine that size. Am right. There are millions of things that which cannot be in our perception. You are very good. Yes i love Astrophysics. I think it really help me to believe in god. thank you dear. Your mind bigger than a Black Hole.
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Thank you so much Binu
Yeah! Human imaginations have no limit
Dey are bigger than black hole
Larger than universe
Deeper than the galaxies
N numerous like stars!
Gday dear
Stay fine
Thanks
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Love the format you used to write this
Very creative
Thank you
As always Sheldon
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Thank you so muchh Sheldon for stoppin by n motivating me!
feelin really glad
gday
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That’s what it is all about
Inspiring each other
To achieve new heights
See you on the other side of creativity
Sheldon
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exactly!
so very true!
u write so beautiful Sheldon:!
lots of wishes until next post
gday friend
: )
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Nice
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thank you so much
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Very pretty poem, thank you for posting it.
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Reblogged this on Truth Troubles: Why people hate the truths' of the real world.
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Thank you so much my friend
wishes from Nepal
✌
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Thank you so much
: )
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This is great. The shape is the cone of the ship?
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Actually No
It could b the shape of
half moon
some part of galaxy
May b of an asteroid
comet
meteors
or part of Mars somwhere
who knows!
Aw! Thank you for feeling like a ship also
This is a different perspective
Thank you so muchh for stoppin by!
have a gr8 day ahead : )
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😊
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hey! Paul
how r u doin?
Its been a long tym! hope u r fyn
and thankyou so muchh
: )
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Surprisingly post,it is useful to me and others,please just keep it on….
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❤ ❤ LOVE it ❤ ❤
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Thanks u
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