The psyche fails to rhyme your heart
Heart then fails to combine physique
Giving rise to
the collision
Being similar to CSMA/CD apart that
You don’t guarantee for your heart
to beat for to rhyme for
yourselves yourselves
Because Truth is! you stand alone in crowds
Its your life
your problems!
Success counts less , lesser than the values
Everyday you are showing to the world
who you are No one needs to
what you are advocate for you
Let it flow, flow from the eternity
Till the time-slots don’t fade away
Until it generates
an EOT and claims!
Not to have lived. Not to have loved.
So love! There you go! This is your LIFE
Make your Make your
own world own space
And you don’t need to stare to other’s star
Make your own Sun, Make your own Moon
Your own
Planet!
Before any LORD in-corp-orates You!
And archives!
ALOHA
WOW… 🙂
and the way of writing…..
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Thanks Prasenjit ; )
But I was expecting u to participate the leibester award : (
Gday
C ya
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Honestly, have no idea about this award. care to explain? 🙂
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I love the way you write and scatter he words around beautifully! 😀
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i can feel those words sizzle through my blood 💉✨ powerful stuff, i love it. 💗
csma/cd? do u work with network routing? ‘cos i do that too 🙂
p-e-a-c-e
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Lau. Kina
Okk
Kasari pathauni request khoii
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Nah!
Only student!
Thanks for stopping by legato
Gday ahead
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Thanks dear Sahana
Gday ahead
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Check my post “Leibester award”
I thought I pinged back!
Anyway see the rules n post on ur blog
Once u r done. Pls ping me back!
Gday prasenjit
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You are just a bit of a word verse super star. Connected 100% and I am not great at deciphering poetry 🙂 xxx
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: )
Thank you so much Daisy!
you r a great poet and a writer! U make everyone smile! thru ur posts!
u r amazing n so r ur posts!
(smile)
Hope shoppings r goin well ;p
(smile) (smile) (smile)
gday
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I have only been offered one award. I declined. I don’t remember what the questions were, I don’t think I objected to them, at least not a ton, although I’m sure I wasn’t enthusiastic about answering them. But the concept of an award where you have to nominate ten other bloggers is irritating and really out of character with what we call awards in every area except blog user generated ones. Presumptuous even. And a bit like a chain letter, which we all know are BS. It occurred to me as I write this that I could create my own award, with the bullcrap cut out. Few and sensible (or perhaps way offbeat and interesting!) and non-invasive questions. No need to nominate anyone else. And other bloggers (or small crews of bloggers) could create other awards, also without the stereotypical wordpress award features… Although I am not sure I would be able to squeeze in (or willing to invest) the time for the nominations, negotiations, and/or voting for an award by committee. Lovely poem. Do I detect a resonance with the piece I published just a bit before this, or is that synchronicity? Although Buddhism has many interesting aspects, I have never been able to swallow the one of the Four Noble Truths that says “All existence is suffering” or similar, like your blog’s slogan, ‘Life is all about PAIN’. Bosh, I say. There are many marvelous, magical, fascinating, and entrancingly unique bits to life. La!
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Judging by the timestamps on these comments, this was not, in fact, published right after my piece, as I thought in above comment. I wonder why it appeared like that in Reader?
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Hello there Lost-In-Mist (wow!)
I respect and agree on ur views of awards and nominations!
Yeah! I’ve seen in WP , many of them rejecting award due to lack of tym ; interest ; etc
But one thing I like to add here is-
WP is also a bit similar to social site (in some ways;) bcoz u got to meet many people here… Like u! : )
Some of them bcom ur admirers; wp friends and even the stars, who encourage ur writings and all.
So, this is the reason I don’t see any bad thing regarding awards and all stuffs (Declaring award-free zone doesn’t make us great; neither participating does!)
Sometimes its all abt love , care n wishes from ur loved ones! (In the form of nominations)
Until we have time. There’s no bad participating.
Also I loved ur idea of creating award! This will encourage many poets n poem lovers!
I just visited ur site n blog ;p
They are quite interesting (attraction and desire in scientific terms!)
I m also happy abt u beliein in Buddishm norms ;p
Exactly! Lord Buddha said EXPECTATIONS ARE THE REASONS FOR PAIN
SO LIFE BECOMES PAIN
: ))
Thankyou so much for stopping by!
Hav a gr8 day ahead
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Bcoz it depends on which comment u replied to
Also I don’t dis-agree that WP is free from bugs!
(Smiling)
Gday
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I am glad to hear that post wasn’t too tangled, or otherwise too personal to be interesting. And I am ?honored and delighted that you think I have succeeded at putting attraction and desire in scientific terms. No doubt most people have their own theories of what love is, or depending on their histories, may get by adequately on some pop culture, traditional, or religious mythological shorthand for what it is. I have read by a wise person that love is work that must be done and maintained, not something that just happens by magic and stays that way… and I think the concept of a ‘true love’ that still lurks in the recesses of many peoples’ lives from disney, hollywood, books ancient and modern, and various real peoples’ claims to have found ‘the one’ or their ‘soul mate’ must be one of the (admittedly many?) factors that aggravates neurosis, obsessive thought patterns, and mildly to severely delusional thinking with varying persistence… As well as perhaps passing up may people the Believer could have been quite happy with learned from, yadda yadda etc.
Yes, I’m glad you like the idea of creating a new award geometry-and-logic space opening it up in the mind for any blogger who wishes to throw their opinion out there. It could mark a big change if a lot of people did.
I didn’t really mean to suggest getting rid of all the chain awards. Just adding more of a new type without that feature, which might take a bit less time for the awardee to complete, and which might actually carry a smidgen more weight (depending on the perceived quality, audience size, frequency it is given out, a bit more of selection criteria, etc.) than those that require the recipient to nominate ten in order to ‘win’ it, placing a sort of unfair demand on someone to participate in the continuous dilution of the meaning of the awards they have been ‘given’ (participated in an exchange of prestige for ?unwilling labor and to have a little badge that is not entirely fake) . And who has time to really take the task seriously of nominating ten people under a criterion with a bit of substance, or even real adherence to a a quite simple criterion, as the nominator understands and perceives it. How much of the nominees sample, how far back in time, should be considered for example. I am sure some do, but I am not on reader everyday really assessing which of the blogs I follow might be most worthy of any award. So, ergo, because I do not want to participate in this system of dilution of the meaning of recognition, and attaching excessive extraneous conditions to the awarding of recognition, any award I may be be nominated for, I am unlikely to ever be able and willing to receive. Think that’s enough.
I have actually read and enjoyed some of your posts before, also…
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Actually it is even more puzzling because the ones I am seeing read 11am to 1pm roughly today, the 10th, and where I am, it is only 337am on the 10th so far…
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Wonderful presentation, loved it.
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Need more help.
How can I nominate you for the award? I mean what’s the process.
and do I need to post 11 questions? If yes, where?
Waiting for your reply.
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Listen!
First post the pic of award
Second post the rules
Third post my questions to u with answers
Fourth Nominate any blogs u like by posting their web address es of wp or names!
Post 11 new questions to them
And finally inform them!
Do this step by step as a new post!
Gday dear
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Morning I_G – how are you today? I have just had the wonderful news that my third paper is to be published – three papers = PhD with no thesis. Hoorah – I’m off to stare at the mountain. B x
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oh wow!!! this is beyond enlightening and fierce!
These are just great:
Make your own Sun, Make your own Moon
Your own
Planet!
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Got it. Will do them soon. Thanks a ton. 🙂
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You never cease to amaze me, Jyotee! Your poetry, and particularly your unique style, is stunning! Well done, very well done… All the best to you and keep smiling! 🙂
Jonathan
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Dear,
Lost-in-mist
Abt love…I also believe that love is more abt care, responsibilities, respect n understandings!
Otherwise it sure breaks one day! If there’s only magic n both wait for the supernatural things to happen!
To me…its all TIME
I have never been lucky enough to decide abt life or love. It has been changing to me….every now n then n which is completely beyond my control. So I call it TIME
I m glad abt ur award plans! Its unique n hope holds more value!
Thank you for stopping by to read n talk.
U’ve been blogging so long. N ur poems r really different. I got to read one in morning.
Will read more
Having less time,these days due to college stuffs.
Gday ahead
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:p
Its a puzzle indeed
: ))
Stay happy
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Thank you so much Dhiraj
Good evening ahead
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Wow!
Congratulations Bruce!
I m fyn . how abt u?
Gr8 news! Very soon u will b writing Dr.Bruce
: ))
U deserve this! U ve done so much research n gained perfection in ur field
Good nyt
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Thank you so much dear Rosy!
How swt of u : ,))
Gday ahead
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Thank you so much dear Jonathan.
Urs r magic!
I kno! I wil never reach to ur level.
Yet love writing my feelings n I love it.
Thanks my friend
Keep smilin
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Pleasure 🙂
Thanks and you too have a good evening ahead
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You are so Sweet your words purr to my ear and show high empathy which I recogise! Bless you too and have the best of days/weeks!
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Thank you my friend.
Yeah!
U also stay fyn
Takecare
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Profound and unique.
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Thank you so much Tosha for ur sweet words
Gday
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You’re welcome xo
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Xo xo
; )
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cool 😀
best of wishes! keep posting ^_~
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Me encanto de esas pequeñas frases que te hacen devolverte a la realidad … No se ingles entiendo al leer el sentido espero ☺️☺️
Enviado desde mi iPhone
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It was really good artwork.
I like your poem and your written style.
Enjoyed alot.
Thanks for sharing with us.
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aww. my pleasure! 🙂
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Thank you so much legato
: ))
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Thanks dear
🙂
Take care
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Thank you so much akki!
For the encouragement and appreciations
Have a gr8 day ahead
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Thank you so much Paul
; ))
Stay fine n blessed
Hope everything goes well soon!
Gday ahead
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My pleasure
Ty
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You’re welcome
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TY
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thank you very much for sharing this good post
Kisses
anita
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Thank you so much dear Anita
: )
Xoxo
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Seriously? Poetry on networking? OR something like that? I am currently studying ALOHA and CSMA/CD, CSMA/CA. This made it even easier to understand. LOL 😀
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Thank you so much Romance for your kind words!
Actually that one was networking of hardware’s and software stuffs!
And this one is about the philosophy of life.
Though I tried my best to keep the mechanism untouched!
(Smile)
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Are you one with networking background? I mean in study 🙂
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No!
i m….just
I think…..a good reader!
Its good to know you are engaged with computers and networking stuffs
Al the best
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So you are a Networking Lecturer?
Thank You, Networking is kind of my interest 🙂
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I think!
I’m the kind of person willing to read everything that interests me!
oh NO!
I am like “NOTHING”
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You are gonna be the most amazing concrete poet, seriously you are! Besides you are a good networking expert (I must say, coz no one dares to compose poem on CDMA/CA). I am gonna show this poem the next day on my class, and se how will lecturer and friends react 😀
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Oh My God!
I m so scared rather!
Only because what your teachers and friends might think!
I m speechless Romance!
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You are amazing poet, this is what they gonna think 😀
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Life is love only depends on you ❤️
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Finally!
wow
In english!
Flow of life is beyond anyones control
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I put translator jijii greetings
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Finally!
Yes : )
Hapy abt that desdemialma
Thanks!
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oh friend if u havent already done i think u might read the beat generation pomes i see in yr pomes a fresh air as their crazy pomeir ciao ~
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wow:!
yeah.
I haven’t done yet.
I found them beautiful Rinaldo!
wil b doin soon after my exms!
ciao!
love
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