Letting your heart suffer the grieves was an option.Letting
it to
galaxies Its exists no-where inside or outside! Don’t you Heal
In the compare Feel
clouds Love! Try searching for it inside yourself! with And
In the Dear smile! Feel being alive! Inside the Deal
Planet My your LIFE!!! They your span Was
In the slots! Feel was love said heart , of another,
Exist the you Unless!beats your Inside.soul time which
It doesn’t inside deep it capture to fails time the Even usually
thing. Is beyond
Magical That For High Fly Don’t !Love Dear My.though options
Hi I_G! Good afternoon – lovely insprational piece! Take care (I hope this finds you well) B
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oh wow! what an interesting style again, and a meaningful poem! 🙂 Great job! 🙂
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Dammi, Jyotee
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Dhanyavaad so muchh Manan
“: )
suva-diwas
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Thank you so muchh Rosy : )
Yeah! A spiral again!! I love the beauty of a spiral
gday
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Thank you so muchh Bruce!
Good-Afternoon
(Nothing personal though,
No expectations!!! is my motto!
esp. wen it coms abt love )
(smile) (smile)
Thanks
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Food for thought..
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I’m lost in the spiral wave, can’t make out what’s written. Reader gives odd sentences.
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Lovely piece 🙂
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Reblogged this on Somniamentis and commented:
I liked this so I reposted it!
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Thanks Daksi!
; ))
Gday
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if u r saying that ; u couldn’t read that
please read in big screen
And start from the first letting to the last letter love!
follow the spiral
Thank you so muchh Dhiraj for ur sweet words
Also I nominated u for the Liebster award
do check my previous post
I think ping-backs r not working!
gr8 evenin
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Thank you so much Mate
stay happy
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Thank you so much my friend!
hav a gr8 day ahead
; ))
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Thought as much. Will have to read on system.
Wow! Nominated for an award so soon, thanks a lot. Will check in a bit.
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: )
yeah!
wil hav to inform!
; )
thanks
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You as well 🙂
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Was it me? I couldn’t find in your Liebster award post.
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ofcourse u!
my previous post
if u don’t find. wil share the link very soon!
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Please I’ll be obliged.
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So creative I loved the uniqueness of alignment of words. It was both creative and thoughtful, really loved this 🙂 Great Work!
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Thank you so muchh Sri
for stopping by and encouraging my love for art
gday
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Anytime, I really love your work, its very unique, and I love how you make it more unique not just by your thoughts, but also by the art of formatting the poem 🙂
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Thank you so much friend!
for ur constant support and love
gr8 day ahead
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Your very welcome, you too have a great day 🙂 🙂
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I appreciate all the visits to IST…..thanx chuq
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thank you too lobotero for visit too
LIAAP
:p
thanks mate!
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😉
be cool.
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Very creative and well written.
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my pleasure chuq
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As I’ve said before, so I say again, you never cease to amaze me with your artistic poetry, Jyotee! As always, all of the very best to you w/peace, love and blessings! 🙂
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Bahut Khub.
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👍👍
Enviado desde mi iPhone
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Reblogged this on ' Ace Friends News ' and commented:
Thanks for your vists and likes hope you are well and great post to share with friends … Ian 👌
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thank you so much Ian
thanks for ur kind words
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😆😆✌
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धन्यवाद
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Thank you my dear
: )
gday
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Thank you so much Jonathan!
u constantly suport me n pour ur sweet words
thank you so much my friend
keep smiling
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Thank you so muchh Tosha
; ))
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YW
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You’re welcome xo
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Nice IG, real good this read
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Thanks CT
; )
Wen u appreciate! That makes me beliv somwr
it was not bad
haha
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You just felt in love with me, but no worries it happens to most of you all
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haha
Is dat so?
I m gonna love no one , rest of my life!
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Of course not, you do know that I´m a woman magnet, even if I don´t try to be or know it….. what´s with you girls?….
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Its also a mystery then!
Smiling
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Hey, you are the girl, so why in the world you do those kind of things….hummm
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स्वागत है आपका ज्योती जी.
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Another fantastical po-puzzle 🙂
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smiling
thank you so very much
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i know poets dont like very much people criticize their ” babies ” but i have to tell you friend … i dont see the spiral … i mean the visual a so called snake walkin pome … i likposhape of a chorus as the words … of course im talikn abt my puter screen maybe others see it … me dont … hugs hugs hugs , ciao~
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this is my new creation then!
hehe
yah! it looks more like a spiral in square!
n not like a snakes!
But style is same yet!
I wonder y?
poems r called babies of poet!
not a friend
not a soulmate
not a love
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yeah!
also screen dependent!
grazie!
sei multo gentile
smile
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oke oke friend i dunno see a spiral here.
i tried with the big puter and…
i dunno see what in my mind is a spiral.
maybe im too much a mathematician one.
oke oke i believe …
wait wait now i see … i believe it’s a spiral …
ok ok …
ciao amica mia ~
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hehe
hold on. hold on!
Y r u in so much hurry Rinaldo : )
wow! its so good. I wish I were also Mathematician type!
I m bad at that,
grazie
spero di centersi di nuva
ciao✌
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The data is extremely appealing
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Thank you so muchh
: )
hav a nyc day
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