Mirror spoke
As she stood by
To speak With the mirror!
Mirror had dark mind
She had black heart
Wrapped in the shiny coat
Mirror showed
her many faces
As she Stood by
The faces Flood-ed out
off the mirror
And ran upon her body
Like thousand horses
She never saw
How dangerous
The real she was!
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Nice👌😊👍
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thanks my friend
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WOW! That is what I always tend to think once I’ve read your poems. This is terryfing but a great piece all the same.
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Thanks Daisy : )
you made my day! 😃
stay blessed
💕
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beautiful and so full of metaphors, deep and spiritual
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Very deep, beautiful!
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Nicely done
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Wow! It must be terrifying to see the ‘real’you…but then on second thought, each one of us has a ‘real’side that we know of. For example, the ‘real’me is extremely disgusting to myself sometimes…but what do others conjecture it as? What your mirror would show her…is it her conjecture or something the mirror conjectures differently? I have to say this poem was deep…it has made me think …
Well done 🙂
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Heart touching !
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Love this poem, not only is it deep and poignant, but I also enjoy what you’ve done with the format. Great stuff, can’t wait to read more.
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A short poem with a powerful and frightening ending! Really enjoyed the read ^.^ – Michelle
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Wooooowwww!!!! 🙂
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Powerful! Love every bit of it! 💙
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Bahut Achche Jyotee ji.
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Reblogged this on automattic 2016.
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Gutsy poem! Yes there is both beauty and danger in our shadow sides. We can not be our true selves unless we reveal our whole selves, imperfect though we are!
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Deep and beautiful! 😊
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Thanks mate @syd7t5
I m happy to see u around.
greetings
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Lol mate I like that! I’ll be back to read some more, don’t worry about that! 😊
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indeed so true!
No-one Is perfect
There are bad sides for sure!
But we jus try to be good daily.
cheers!
Thanks for ur thoughts : )
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thanks dear!
good to c u around after long
: )
keep smilin
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thank you so much Sagar ji
✌
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thank you so much dear
have a lovely day ahead
love
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thanks dear
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:):D
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Thank you so much Michelle.
Alwz peopl r agressive!
I thought y not mirror somtyms
haha
good evening : )
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Thank you so much mate!
I appreciate ur kind words.
happy to know u here at wp. and I m excited to read urs.
keep smiling
have a nice day! : )
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Thank you so much my friend.
good evenin ahead
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indeed!
there r many faces of human
n its a human nature too
bcoz human is an imperfect being.
but we try to be real
cheers!
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thanks dear
cheers
💕
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Ur Welcome Jyotee ji.
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My pleasure
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Incredible! and love this poem. It describes perfectly of who we are as humans and the good and bad that consumes us as a species.
Love it! 🙂
I am back!
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welcome
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Amazing one!! Sometimes mirror shows the real image of your other side though its the curious case of false reflection.:)
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Thank you so muchh friend ” 🙂
you are alwz supportive n motivating.
have a lovely day
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mention not 🙂 he he !
now I’m short of words 🙂
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Man this is fabulous
‘.. Mirror had dark mind… She had black heart’… beautifully crafted ….love ur work
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Awesome, especially the part where they run out of the mirror, great visuals.
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thanks dear!
good to see u around
have a nice day!
: )
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thanks dear!
yah
it was mirror’s day! i guess
even physical things have right to show the real “them” sometyms
haha
takecare
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Beautiful and meaningful too! 🙂
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thank you so muchh Dilip : )
have a lovely night
cheers
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Good to get back in touch with you 🙂
Best wishes always!
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Good to have u around.
cheers!
💕
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haha….they do really do 😀
take care have fun 🙂
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This is really powerful and beautiful at the same time. Wow, I’m intrigued!
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This is really powerful and beautiful at the same time. Wow, I’m intrigued! 😊Great read!
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thanks sweety!
its good to meet u in WP.
will b connected with words alwz
💕
–Jyotee
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Nice one~!
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thanks dear
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I find this as a warm welcome, thank you 😊 stay blessed!
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Gorgeous work! A great reminder. Thanks for the visit.
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thanks dear one!.
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Would you be willing to lend your wonderful talents to this project?
We have 140 contributions to date, and I am trying again to rope in as many contributors to the Poets for Peace challenge (in place until this the end of August). The many voices in response to this have been fantastic, and I’d love you to add yours (again, if applicable) if you can. Feel free to use an existing piece of writing or a new one asking for peace and/or about the troubled times in which we live.
If you are interested, please leave your poem in the comments section of Neha’s blog and it will be added. https://forgottenmeadows.wordpress.com/2016/07/16/calling-all-poetscreative-minds-to-a-grand-collaboration-poets-for-peace/comment-page-5/#comment-19287
Thank you –
Your voice matters.
Lubesh
‘We are so grateful to be part of this community where poets and creative minds from around the world stand together uniting for PEACE! This collaboration is open till August 31st and we hope to see more of you join in!’
– Neha
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I am excited to hear those
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Thank you so much Renate!
This is so very kind of you!
Lots of smiles to ur uplifting words.
U r just too sweet.
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Thank you so much Neha!
Yes! I am in.
And will b visiting u very soon.
Thanks for the knock!
Cheers!
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Thank you for the alert signal.
Yeah!
I get lots of spams nowadays and strange comments!
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I am Lubesh. neha is from forgotten meadows lol sorry for the confusion.
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Oops
I m so sorry!
Yeah!
U r lubesh since ur id says that.
Oho!
Thank you so much Lubesh!
–Jyotee
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Read almost all your poems since last year that I hadn’t read as I was not blogging and using WP… Truly loved your poems👍👌
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ohh hy !
after a long time,
where had u been?
good to see u again Albert. :- )
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where had u been so long??? and y stopped blogging?
hope life’s good
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Hmm all that I used to write was because of someone and the fellings
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I had a source of inspiration, a person who was the reason I wrote and for whom I wrote, but things never turned out my way, she was always a good friend, we couldn’t be more than that and you know all this followed by lot of pain and suffering after things were not good with her I couldn’t do anything creative and I left writing coz I never felt like writing, she was my inspiration
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Just busy with studies and stuff
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Times change people change but life goes on, and indeed life is all about Pain and how you get over it, meanwhile I’m delighted to know that you still remember me. So what are you upto now? I mean studies life, all good?
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Indeed.
Life is such.
And once we accept the fact/ it becomes smooth.
Good that u r back. :- )
Take care
Yah. Study is on
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Hmm sort of meanwhile things Start getting smooth people never miss a chance to make it rough again😂😂
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Love never dies. Love never goes anywhere. It lives forever in mind n memory.
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So, smile. That u were so lucky to fall in love n experience heavenly feelings of love.
Don’t feel sad. Smile. Smile. Smile heals everything
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Send me emails rather. I use no social apps.
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Yup trying to that put at times I feel like wasted and I wish it never happened all it gave me was pain, freaking pain all the time and now there a void, that seems impossible to heal
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And I’d love to hear from you if you ever have time and wanna pair of eager years to listen to you, which I guess you already have
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Sounds cool: – )
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Talk to u soon
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