World of Magnets

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Written for : –

Magnetic Poetry Saturday Challenge

Inspired by :-

https://janedougherty.wordpress.com/2016/07/12/i-explore-eternity/

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55 thoughts on “World of Magnets

  1. splendidly spectacular 🙂 “cold sun / hot moon” not only are great lines, refreshing (who would love a hot moon?), but each line containing only accented syllables, between two lines with their mix of accented and unaccented syllables. The “but” creates a contrast with what comes after, “falling into the clouds” – this is different than loving dark garden poetry? is falling into the clouds a positive or a negative? when we literally fall into clouds, we basically are plummeting to earth, yet there is the metaphorical falling into clouds, something similar to “playing with rainbows” maybe. Is it better to live with our heads in the clouds than going through the struggles of climbing the mountain (corporate ladder etc)? Is the falling inevitable, the other side of the coin from loving a hot moon?

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  2. Thank you so much friend.

    well!
    “falling” is never a good word i guess!
    yeah! but falling in the clouds while climbing the mountain can be taken as an-abnormal falling!

    bcoz wat i believ is no one writes until there is pain or obsession or anything that cud be…..but sure—-not a normal thing!

    cold sun n hot moon resemble the dis-orders
    leading to garden the dark poetry!

    An-abnormal or metaphorical fall can be though taken also as a good sign…as u said n i just now realised that.

    thank you for ur kind words!

    i love those magnets : )

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  3. smiling!

    yeah!
    human life is full of expectations!
    full of desires
    a race to gain; to achieve..something orsomeone

    and everythn leads to pains!

    yeah! may b!
    they say.. pains are the keys to opn the golden gates of life.

    but does that mean u r enjoyin ur life
    n untochhd by pains?

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