Written for : –
Magnetic Poetry Saturday Challenge
Inspired by :-
https://janedougherty.wordpress.com/2016/07/12/i-explore-eternity/
Written for : –
Magnetic Poetry Saturday Challenge
Inspired by :-
https://janedougherty.wordpress.com/2016/07/12/i-explore-eternity/
Now that must count as Post-Modern! Taking inspiration from a poem inspired by a random assortment of fridge magnet words! Love your version 🙂
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smiling!
yeah!
it was the lovely experience.
I think I loved it.
Thank you so much Jane : )
urs was too deep.
love to u
💕
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This is certainly magnetic,i love your thought process over the subjects & words selection.Beautiful poetry!! Shubh Prabhat 🙂
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Beautiful as always Jyotee!
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thank you so much dhiraj
for bein supportive as alwz : )
smiling
gday ahead
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thankyou so much Prashant : )
Yah this was fun.
i m lovin this style : )
Subha-Sandhya : )
Suva-Diwas
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Always a pleasure to read your work Jyotee 🙂
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Life is not only about pain it is a just one side of Life my dear..!
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splendidly spectacular 🙂 “cold sun / hot moon” not only are great lines, refreshing (who would love a hot moon?), but each line containing only accented syllables, between two lines with their mix of accented and unaccented syllables. The “but” creates a contrast with what comes after, “falling into the clouds” – this is different than loving dark garden poetry? is falling into the clouds a positive or a negative? when we literally fall into clouds, we basically are plummeting to earth, yet there is the metaphorical falling into clouds, something similar to “playing with rainbows” maybe. Is it better to live with our heads in the clouds than going through the struggles of climbing the mountain (corporate ladder etc)? Is the falling inevitable, the other side of the coin from loving a hot moon?
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Thank you so much friend.
well!
“falling” is never a good word i guess!
yeah! but falling in the clouds while climbing the mountain can be taken as an-abnormal falling!
bcoz wat i believ is no one writes until there is pain or obsession or anything that cud be…..but sure—-not a normal thing!
cold sun n hot moon resemble the dis-orders
leading to garden the dark poetry!
An-abnormal or metaphorical fall can be though taken also as a good sign…as u said n i just now realised that.
thank you for ur kind words!
i love those magnets : )
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thank you so much friend.
but its tru n applies to all
Life is more abt pain.
cheers!
: )
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Nice to know how strong beliver u are of Pain.
one thing no pain no gain.. Some peole gets pleasure thru pain… M i rite?
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smiling!
yeah!
human life is full of expectations!
full of desires
a race to gain; to achieve..something orsomeone
and everythn leads to pains!
yeah! may b!
they say.. pains are the keys to opn the golden gates of life.
but does that mean u r enjoyin ur life
n untochhd by pains?
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So nice answer and nicely detailed reply. Every end have a new start… So i have passed the point of extrem pain now enjoying life… Bcz nobody is best healer of ur pain except u..
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indeed!
and I m happy for you.
that u ve only joys n love all around u : )
cheers!
have a lovly day
💕
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Thanks for such nice wishes those travels from distance and reached me with love. Hugs
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
VERY ATTRACTIVE WAY OF DOING POETRY! 🙂
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dear poetess, a futuristic item now ? ciao from italy.
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ciao Rinaldo
grazie amica mia : )
Well
yah! u can say that!
it also relates to ups n downs of life!
: )
Namaste from Nepal
:D:)
smiling
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Thank you so much Jonathan!
: )
have a lovely day
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Namaste from Italia.ciao~Rinaldo.
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Must mean your works are electric! 🙂
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Absolutely brilliant……!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lovely, Jyotee! Keep it up!!!!!! 😀 🙂
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Thank you so much sweety!
love
💕
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You’re welcome, Jyotee!!!😀😀
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