Her Story!

She stood


 she conquered


entire planet.

 Her eyes


 like tiny dew drops.

She had a big smile

 on her lips.



 the deep blue sky,

And reflecting her dreams

upon the brownish Earth.


went nearer

and closer

to explore my curiosity.

Where might be

she wandering.

And what might be

she wondering



made me shake her.

What she did was




This made me realize

how mysterious

the human nature can be!!!

—->>>>how many of us have time to stop by and stare at the people passing by!—->>>> Life is more like a race these days!

63 thoughts on “Her Story!

  1. Hi! Jyoti..hope you’re doing great and a beautifully written piece.I will you Captain planet now.. haha!Its always something there in your writings related with nature and thats the best part of your writing.Have a nice day ahead Keep smiling πŸ™‚

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  2. Hello Prashant! yeah…life is goin onn and so is me with life:)

    I cannot remain untochd from the love of nature! I have found it as my closest companion in every steps of my life.
    hope u r fine my dearest!


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  3. Ah! Jyotee, you have captured the mystery of human nature beautifully while at the same time creating a superlative mystique in this one with glittering eyes and smiles, who “stands like she has conquered the entire planet.” Your poem is beautifully interwoven, appealing and poignant . . . and more! All the best to you w/blessings! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

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  4. Thank you so much sweet jonathan : )

    yeah…I cudnot find out! was she happy or sad.
    was she enjoying or was lost.

    how can we find out just by observing ! no?

    n y wud she tell me just bcoz I asked 😦


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  5. People don’t really look at other people…they’re too busy looking at whatever electronic device they’re holding.
    I still look…and imagine…and wonder. Guess I’m old school. LOL
    Beautiful piece. πŸ™‚

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  6. yeah!

    People today try capturing each moments and forget to feel them : )

    We forget to notice the small things that are on our way!
    we have lots of expectations for big things in life and make our life a race!

    thank-you so much laurel ! : )

    have a wonderful weekend : )


  7. Most times, we perceive of things based on our prejudices. Which I guess is totally prone to we going haywired. You have highlighted this in your words pretty beautifully. Jyoti. πŸ˜ƒ

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  8. yeah! thats so true Asha : )

    And we r in so hurry that we cannot observe and feel the beauty of things! and our perceptions turn likewise.

    Reminds me of these stanzas…

    “Whats life if full of care
    We have no time to stand & stare”

    good morning lovely : )

    Keep smiling


  9. Indeed!
    It is like impossible to read a human mind and human nature!
    Wat is goin inside a humans thought process.,no one can guess!
    Human is a mysterious being!

    Thank you so much Roland!

    G’Day & weekend : )

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  10. Your poetry brings a good message.

    It’s rare nowadays if anyone stops and stares at me and smiles. Here in L.A. people are too mean and stuck up. I tried many stops to look here and there and bring a nice smile. They ignore me or give me a bad ugly look. The only time I got a smile back was once. It was beautiful and amazing. πŸ™‚

    I love this poem a lot. πŸ™‚ Excellent writing. πŸ™‚

    P.S Got a new poem posted. Feel free to stop by and inputs are all welcomed. πŸ™‚


  11. Reading this a ‘World smile day’…couldn’t me more appropriate πŸ™‚
    And yes, it is so easy just smile at each other. You don’t even have to stand still to do it…just smile in passing by πŸ™‚
    Nicely done again Y.

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  12. Smooth, i think from around the blogosphere if i was made to make a list of top 3 best writers, or poets…
    Your name will be up there! Hope you doing okay, and all is well. ☺

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  13. Hello Mahmoud!

    Thank you so much for stopping by!
    and appreciating my work.

    yeah! I just visited ur blog.
    its awesome .

    y r comments disabled? or may b its visible only wen opened through a browser?

    thanks : )

    keep smilin

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  14. Thank you for letting me know! I had no idea my comments were disabled!
    THANK YOU πŸ˜€
    ill keep checking any new posts! keep it up too!

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