The sky fell upon her heart
The earth stood on her head
The only black-lights she saw
She- who never cried !
Her feet-s ached as she walked
Her ways turned cold and fogged
Her heart was a block of ice
She- who never cried !
The sun she dream-t of far away
A lost girl , didn’t find her way
she roamed inside the in-finite dreams
She-who never cried !
She counted her loved ones, so far
In sun , In moon and in the star
She was as lonely as the dark-nights
Just Cried-seeing you hurt !!!
A deep expression of sadness and pain. Thanks for sharing.😭
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Life becomes easier when we accept–there can b bad days!
And I am prepared ….no matter how worse it gets!
Thanks for stopping by dear !
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She is very brave saathi..
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Indeed!
She is!
Thanks sathi
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Nepalese are as strong as Everest .. They know how to be kind and rock solid at the same time saath
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Smiling : )
That’s very true.
We learn a lot from Everest and so many mountains each day!
We r innocent people 🙂 jus like u !
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Ohhh dear… Thank you.. U made me smile
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But She must Cry !!! nice one. 🙂
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That is so true : )
Crying for reasons ….
Change the reasons ….
For crying : p
Thanks dear !
Gd evenin
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I find it helpful most of the time 😛
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Each innocent and emotional bankrupts — are used to :p
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HA ha है 🙂
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Smiling back :p
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And they can even smile back in words 🙂
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They say anythin— is possible….I just gave a try!
It worked 🙂
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No words can really tell how she feels and yet you’ve tried doing justice to it. Nice one, Jyoti.
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Yeah!
She must be the brave-st girl !
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Yet with a soft heart….this is strange!
Like u said…there must b a child inside.
Thanks asha : )
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Such a poignant example of an expression of sorrow and pain. Very nice. =)
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Thank you Kevin : )
She finally cried for love. That was a twist ; p
Gud.evenin from Nepal
–Jyotee
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Love prevails in the end. I like that twist. Good afternoon from the dusty state of Texas.
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Brave and persevering ❤️❤️️
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Thank you so much dear!
Keep smiling : )
Ciao
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You are a gifted writer!
Have a nice day!
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Then I shall also give it a try 🙂
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Sad yet compelling. Your words so brilliantly portray what she must see and feel. It takes enormous thought to carve something like that.
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Positive.
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Well done!
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Again, glad your back! If I understand correct you had quit an adventure, wow. And what a marvelous pieces of art you’ve posted the last couple of days. Wishing you a fantastic weekend, big hug! XxX
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Wow! You made my day!
Thank you sooo much dear!
I can’t say! Life has alwz been uncertain! And adventurous.
Let’s see wat happens next.
We r here to experience things. Wat matters good or bad. There’s an to everything :p..
Hugs back and lots of love
🙂
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Totally agree…we need both Yin and Yang 😉
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Thank you so much Moodi :p my dearest mate!
Keep smiling
Love to u
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So true ; )
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Thank you so much Rinaldo : )
Means a lot 🙂
Take care
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Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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Thank you dear one ! : )
gday
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You are welcome!
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So beautiful and painful, Jyotee 🙂
BTW, when you will submit a guest post for my little blog. I love your poems and I am sure that my readers will love them, too 🙂
Have a great day, dear friend ❤
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Great one Jyoteeji.
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Such a sad heartfelt poem true for many of us:(
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Thankyou so much dear Monica : )
okk I will submit it very soon ! via mail?
Thanks for ur gracious words
keep smiling : )
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Yes, Jyotee, by mail 🙂
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Wow your talented very well wtitting
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Reblogged this on ' Ace Friends News ' and commented:
The mind never sleeps as both pain and gain fight to get the upper hand … Ian 👍
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The ultimate expression of pain and complete emptiness.
I know the acceptance of this feeling. In the end we cope with it and move forward to something greater. I love this poem of yours. 🙂
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Your words just express a lot of emotion!! I really love this poem!
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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always a dark subject…besides y i cant comment in u’r other recent post?
write something motivating or coming out from pain n darkness, it’ll help me these days.
it’s dark but gr8 thou…try to find happy ending 🙂
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She is very brave, thnak you so much for good sharing dear
Kisses back to you
Anita
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Thank you for writing a great blog
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nice Blog! 🙂
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I like well structured poems, as this one is.
You here are very sad…so it is very easy to enter your words…to live a little into them…
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Thank you so much!
I am glad that you stopped by.
yeah! pain is a powerful feeling sometimes.
gday
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Thankyou so much Sarah
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Thanks Anita !
happy to see u around.
kisses back
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Made me smile.
Dhanyavaad pahila ta.
lau! kaha jaile dark ni.
last poems were bright :p
Happy ending :! wats that ? :p
Only if I were a traveller n photographer like you.
ani jaile it wud b beautiful n joyful !
Hoina ra?
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Thank you so much dear!
yeah. I alwz write through my heart n soul. may b soooo…. its emotional !
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Thanks my dearest!
Missed ur poems! Must have busy days.
stay happy. keep smiling
peace n love
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Yea. You’re right!! Its nice! I love your poetry a lot!! 🙂
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You are welcome. 🙂
yay!!! You’re here and wrote back. I missed you. Where have you been?
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Dhanyavaad saagar ji
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Thank you so much Susan.
peace n love to u
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Thank you for your gracious words n for stopping by!
glad to see u here
gday : )
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Thanks Ian !
have a blessed day : )
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Thanks dear.
you always have been so supportive.
lots of love
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thanks : )
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I write poems all the time I try to write in detail and draw you in I’ll be writing more after my show lol I’m not as good as you but I try my daddy was a poet. He passed in 2007 and I believe I have his hands cause I write just like him
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Sorry about your loss !
He must be a great poet.
well! To me writing has always been an amazing experience.
I feel n I am touched; only then I can write.
All the best to you!
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I feel the same way all best to you too
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Just like me. My kindred spirit
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: )
cheers!
and Thanks
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Smiles.
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oh you are very welcome dear
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Swagat Hai Jyotee ji.
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You too … Nice post .. 😊
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Oh! I missed this beautiful verse with wholesome of sad & painful expressions though portraying a inspiring message of bieng brave.
Lovely work as always!!
Shubh Ratri to smiling poetess 🙂
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traveler ra photographer ko matra happy ending hunxa ra? tei ni my life is hard these days.i’ve moved to new place soo even could take pictures how pity is that. u were gayab during Dashain, did u traveled? hab u jotted down something during those hours?xa vani post gara hai, i’ll read u’r experience.
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Awesome poem and deep in meaning💓💓
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So poignant words and a beautiful poem
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