Dense, dark woods of your hair
Lonesome-ness on face, yet fair
Your glittery eyes, crystal clear
Miles far away, still so near
Your lost visions,and deep looks
Mysterious smile like poetry of books
Glimpses of you, weaved my world
But you were an sketch!,somebody told
Now its time to shape you wholly
Breeze of your love, touches slowly
Desire of you throughout lingers
Innocent ,magical, ones are fingers
You are excited to be completed
To complete you,I am excited
Few more weeks to go my love
And we create our own globe !
#For the love of Arts!!!
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Emotion triggering stuff 😊
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Ha ha
Thanks!
Emotions are the only things, found in my poems : )
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very nice saathi..but this time i dint your usual pattern ..
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And i hope u found some of it in mine
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Thanks sathi : )
This is a rhyme and rhymes have their own usual patterns.
Thanks for noticing : )
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thanks sathi.. but i liked the content. 🙂
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_____________ no words to take a shape, what am I to say______
Have a nice day 🙂
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Nice One Jyotee ji.
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yeah!
complicated to configure….. complications which are abstractions….
have a beautiful evenin
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Dhanyavaad Sagar jj
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Beautiful rhyme, indeed.
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Amazing poem as ever. 🙂
Where have you been?
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Thank you so much dear !
I was lost and now I am wide awake n found.
Hope you have been well.
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Thank you so much
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You’re welcome
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Aapka Swagat Hai Jyotee Ji.
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You always leave me wanting more
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Means a lot
Thank you : )
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Thanks dear one : )
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WoW!!!! Wonderful like always Jyoti though it looks like different from your usual style of writing and one the best i read from your pen.
I hope smiling poetess is doing well!
Have a great week ahead😊
Merry Christmas & a great new year ahead to you💐🙏
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Thank you so much Prashant.
Yeah,
Trying diff things these days.
I am fine. thank you.
how have u been.
Lots of wishes for Christmas and New year to u n whole family.
keep smilin
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I am good & thanks for wishes!!
Always great to see your words…
Smiles back to your way poetess 😊
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Good post.
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Most welcome:)
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It is always a pleasure
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Thank you
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This was sooo riveting! I nominated you for an award, you may like to check it out:) https://tehreemsiteblog.wordpress.com/2016/12/22/the-versatile-blogger-award/
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loved this !
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Well done Y, well done.
XxX
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Lovely…!!! 😀
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Thank you so much for showing your love towards my blog.
I really loved your poem “Her rhyme of bed time”
Keep writing
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Thank you
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Thanks dear ; )
keep smilin
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Thanks Ananya
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You’re welcome!!:D
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Thank you so much too for liking the poetry, this gives me motivation for further effort and I sure will share more of my work in future:’)
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much Akansha
keep smilin
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Nice poem
Kind regards,
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Reblogged this on KCJones.
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Your words connect to the heart- People need to be reached , and this is exactly what you are doing. Thank you for writing and connecting.Have a great day…. ( Thank you for your comment)
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Thank you so much
Means a lot 🙂
have a blessed day
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Hello there! This post could not be written any better!
Reading through this post reminds me of my good old room mate!
He always kept chatting about this. I will forward this post to him.
Fairly certain he will have a good read. Many thanks for sharing! http://milaveriados.com/user/profile/83179
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Have you ever thought about publishing an ebook or guest authoring on other blogs?
I have a blog centered on the same ideas you discuss and
would love to have you share some stories/information. I know my visitors would enjoy your work.
If you are even remotely interested, feel free to shoot me an e mail.
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