You said
We had our own sky
Only the clouds
Mis-lead us
By floating, And creating
Illusions,
Hallucinations,
Into our minds
Does that mean
We need to clear our visions?
Or, we need to clear the clouds?
I know,
The sky is there
And will be gone no-where,
Until we are gone !
Then,
What is the ultimate reason
For the reason?
To clear the sky?
Or, To clear the vision?
But,
What is the sky?
What are the clouds?
Which ones are mine?
And, which ones are thy-ne?
#Confusions
#Personal Thoughts-1
We have our own sky,no matter where we lie, in the sky or in the clouds so high. The clouds float, cover our sky , hide our visions, for no good reasons and change like seasons. Why clouds are there?, everywhere, so that we care, and its no rare, to include the clouds, in our prayer?
These clouds distract us, our thoughts, our ultimate goals, and the good reasons, for which we are here on this Earth. So, What are our goals? To abolish the clouds, the wandering clouds and to clear our sky, clear our visions, for the good reasons and be a constant season? So that, our sky shines clearer, brighter and everyone admires its beauty.
The New Year 2017 starts. We have our own goals, dreams, thoughts and better visions and resolutions for the year.Lets not let clouds mislead us,dis-tract us and create illusions into our minds. Lets make our sky beautiful,which shines like the diamond, inside this space.
#Be aware of the clouds !!!
Clouds concept-Roman
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Wow, marvelous piece of art again! Well done, my friend, well done.
Wishing you a safe trip into 2017 and all the best for the new year.
Big hug, XxX
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And clouds have fallen; just like they did last year. Hoping the clouds will clear up soon.
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Marvellous work of word-art, my friend! May you experience a most blessed New Year!
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Clouds being the distraction in our sky full of goals. Loved the concept Amazingly penned down piece.😍
I wish you all luck and success in all your endeavours of 2017.😊
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So Nice.
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Wow it’s beautiful!!!!
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*smiles*
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—- only the wishes, इस्माइलिङ 😃
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Wish you a most felicitous year ahead, Jyoti. 😍
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Amazing 🙂
A happy and productive 2017 to you.
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Good advice! Better late than never! Happy, happy New Year, Jyotee! 💝
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You did well, darling. Clouds and skies are a common theme for the beginning of 2017.
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Happy New Year All The Best In 2017
May God Fulfill Your All Desires In This Year
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Thank you my dearest : )
Wish you a very Happy New year 2017
May you have peace, prosperity and love throughout the year.
Xxx
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Yeah, Hoping for the Best.
Clouds must be cleared and sky must shine, by hook or by crook. 🙂
All the best of the New Year 2017
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Thank you so much my friend.
Have a wonderful year !!!
and may you have endless love n peace.
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I would want it happen naturally. The experience of going through the clouds might help me in understanding the clear sky better.
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Thank you dear one.
yeah, Roman is an amazing thinker and a philosopher.
His visions are extraordinary.
Thank you for dropping by.
Happy New Year 2017 to you and your loved ones.
May you have unlimited love and blessings this year.
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Thank you Sagar Ji.
Enjoy yourself and keep smiling
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Thank you shaggy
Have a blessed day n year : )
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Smiles back : )
And lots of love
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Lots n lots n lots of wishes to you my friend
Happy new year 2017
Stay Happy
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Same to U.Ma’am
“Wo Smile Kis Kaam Ki Jahan Tera Na Ho Basera.!
Jyotee Bin Duniyan Ke Har Shahar-Koune Andhera.!!”
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Thank you so much dear
Have a blessed year
Stay happy n keep smiling
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Thank you Raviera : )
May you have peaceful, wonderful and prosperous 2017
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Thanks lovely 🙂
Your love is always special
Happy New Year 2017 to you and your whole family
Stay happy
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Thank you so much dear
Yeah,
Clouds must be cleared in 2017
All the best and millions of wishes to you
Stay blessed
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So very true !!!
All the best for your journey!
Hope this to be the most beautiful experiences of life.
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😃 plz check your mail
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Thank you, Jyotee. May each year improve over the last!
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Dhayavaad Sagar Ji
Aapke har sapne , har armaan, har khwahis purii ho
Aapko har khusi mile
Happy New year 2017
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Shukriya aur Shukria Jyotee Ji,
Aapko Bhi Yahi Sab Kuch.
Have a Nice Day.
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Same. I believe in you.
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WoW!!! This different from pen Jyoti & indeed we do have so many doubts & dilemmas in our mind in our lives too to work upon…wonderful thought by lovely wordsmith📝👌👌
Wish you & your loved one’s all success & happiness for this new year ahead.God bless you smiling poetess and stay in touch😊🙏
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I call this poem of yours, a masterpiece of poetry.
The questions of humanity. Clouds, do they age? or is it our illusion that we as humans age with the clouds themselves? or does the sky itself age inside the pocket of the gods?
Love this poetry of yours. 🙂
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You’re most welcome ^_^
2017 will be a great year!
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have a happy new year.
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I couldn’t refrain from commenting. Very well written!
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Reblogged this on KCJones.
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Clear the grey clouds of confusion
Clear the black clouds of hate and anger
Clear the grey clouds of depression and disappointment
Clear the grey clouds of fear
The sky now appears clean and blue
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Thats so beautiful n so true!
Thank you for the most gracious words Kiran : )
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Thank you for being a part of my world
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Thank you too lovely : )
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Beautiful and touching. Thank you for the follow and happy 2017.
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And likewise,
Thank you for reading and stopping by.
Have a great day n year 2017
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💐
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however this webpage gives feature based
content.
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There is no you to ask these questions.
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Yah,!
I often created everything inside my imagery world.
often do. and be happy
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Me, too! They’re wonderful, there! You can come to mine, anytime, Jyotee.
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Hello! I know this is kinda off topic however , I’d figured
I’d ask. Would you be interested in trading links or maybe guest writing a blog post or vice-versa?
My website addresses a lot of the same topics as
yours and I think we could greatly benefit from each other.
If you are interested feel free to shoot me an email.
I look forward to hearing from you! Fantastic blog by the way!
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Thank you so much for your kind words and appreciating & supporting my work.
I couldn’t find your email.
Rather pls feel free to email me and explain , what exactly you are looking for.
This is my email address
niceuser73@gmail.com
Thank you
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Maybe that’s not a blogger, Jyoti…. Iphone 7 offers? I don’t think it sounds real…
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I thought so too.
I get so so so many spam comments.
I don’t know why?
some are so strange.
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Tro to check their “username” against their email name and country etc and see if they make sense or seem to match up before approving them. I found one I put through when I first started blogging, and it unleashed a whole torrent of excessive spam just afterwards, but now they are starting to taper off.
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really liked this poem. it’s strange because there is something beautiful about clouds in general. and sometimes i think of heaven, but you manage to give clouds an ambiguous function. i’m trying to make sense about when you ask if a cloud is yours or if it’s not your cloud. do you mean a confusion that’s the result from your internal situation or clouds from external problems or other people’s shit. either way. out of the few poems i read this one has me thinking.
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