Here we are
I and me
Sitting alone at the edges, till ages
Just the air is there, to accompany
Unless we imagine, you to be.
And when we don’t
We are in complete isolation.
We often are woke-n up
By the eyes running over us.
And we get scared
And close our eyes and mind in haste
To re-start our systems with a blink
And there you are, beside us
We smile at you
And you smile back.
This is how human life runs
With few realism’s, Ruling our bodies
And few illusions,
Ruling our souls !!!
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Great voice
And great rhythm
As Sheldon Always
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The depth of this piece is outstanding. Great work
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With few realism’s, Ruling our bodies
And few illusions,
Ruling our souls !!!
👆
Beautifully phrased ❤
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“ALONE”, but START
WITHIN,,OWN’S HEART
Each “plays” THEIR PART
The “lucky”, find the WAY TO MARK.
( THANK YOU!!!!!!!! …for the “Gander” of REACH.)
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Beautiful! I hope you are doing well, I know you might be really surprised to see a notification with my name on it. Seems like ages 😀 Was passing by my Blog after months and thought I look over my notification bar, saw your name and quickly rushed here to take a look at your blog.
The beaute in your writing is just getting better and better dear, I am currently here https://www.facebook.com/HumanityLivesOn/
I found success at facebook and I am working towards getting it bigger, do pass by if you can. I would be absolutely delighted! Hoe you are doing well Jyotee and this brings a smile on your face as I carry one writing this and putting the fullstop at the end of this comment even though I don’t want to. 😉
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I and me?? It’s powerful. I just couldn’t stop until the end. 😊
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Mind Blowing Creation Jyotee ji.
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Thanks lovely!
xoxo
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Thank you Sheldon.
G’day
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Yeah, thank you.
Trips towards the depth of imaginations are wonderful indeed !
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Thank you so much Akshay.
Glad you liked.
And some people have habit of living in imaginary worlds and totally be an aliean to the real world.
Human nature is most complicated thing to deal with.
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Aha !
Thanks!
Such a meaningful comment ! :- )
Everyone’s life is paining
And everyone’s lookin for meaning
Yes, ALONE is the beginning
Yet everyone is believing
The fake eyes and false visions.
Unless someone wakes you up and drags you to so called realism, which is painful.
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Thanks dear :- )
Take care
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Thanks :- )
Hope everything’s good.
:- )
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Ohh myy!
Wow! A surprise :- p
I m fine. How are you Cezane?
What happened??
Its more than ages I guess :- p
Glad to hear about your success at fb. Congratulations!
I know whatever you initiate is a grand success always :- )
I will visit you this evening Cezane.
I have a lot to tell you and hear from you too :- )
See ya!
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Thank you so much.
I appreciate your words :- )
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Dhanyavaad Sagar Ji.
Milte hain jald hi. :- )
Just now had a walk with your sayaris. :- p
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I loved your flow of words
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Thank you so very much :- )
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Indeed!!
Even we find some people superfluous in the “Online world” But their “Real world” be so different😂😂
(I could think of so many names)
But yeah, thats a different story though!
Keep it up girl!
Keep posting!❤✌
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Haha
But virtual world is a different thing.
Its not about real world vs virtual world. but about imaginary world of thoughts imaginations and dreams.
Do you ever sit and ponder for a while and enjoy? About anything that doesn’t exist in your life. Or murmur about how you feel to your inner self. This is the another world. Or dream something !
And on virtual world, totally depends on people using it and is driven by the nature. could be either similar or opposite. Is totally their perceptions and usages. :- )
Thank you !
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Yes.. Yess, absolutely!
“Body and soul connections”
“Dream world and Real world”
👆That is what i understood and meant when i commented “Beautifully phrased” earlier.❤
The “Virtual world” thing was just a random thought which popped up in my mind later.😁😂
Cheers.
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:- )
Great !
Thanks for stopping by :- )
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Always You’re Welcome Jyotee ji.
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You’re welcome. It would be if you take a trip 😉
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I have always admired your enactment with words…u r amazing Jyotee.
Those “illusions’ u said….. u swept me
keep going on 🙂
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Heya Jyotee!
The ending is very admirable!!
Beautifully written as well as concluded!
Happy returns of the day 🙂
(I’m back to WordPress.. yayy)
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Very beautifully penned. ☺
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Thanks dear
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You have to send me a real picture soon
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Poetry is so vague, or so unfathomable! Who do understand your depth!
Lovely bit 🙂
And, hey hello 😉
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wow!, nice piece, keep goin’ deep
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Thank you so muchh!
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hey! Wow.
Good to be back again :- )
I emailed you this evenin.
take care
Thanks !
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hey. hi. Yousuf
welcome back :- )
thanks for stoppin by.
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