You appear like a nightmare,
The black-holes surround.
I constantly gaze and peep-out.
And wonder,
To an adult you have grown.
The gloom and the glow, you have known.
This excites me, equally.
Like an intoxicated girl.
Despair in love, Addicted to the body,
Lost inside the eyebrows of her man.
Your thunder spark the currents.
Tear the walls of my soul.
Aching like the Sun, Healing as the rain,
At the same time.
Like a mature man,
You handle everything so calmly.
Swallow all the hurdles.
And fill me with the shower of joys.
This way, you embrace my each cell.
Like its your own.
With the drops,
That extinguishes the volcanoes.
Continuously evolving inside me.
And this expands our love
Like the mystery,
Of the ever-expanding universe.
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Join the Muktak Community, if you are interested in writing Muktaks.
Visit and explore the rest, yourselves. ———-#
I love your metaphors
Very powerful images
Simply beautiful
As sheldon always
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Have you heard from Jonathan?
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Thank you so much Sheldon.
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No!
Is he irregular ?
well, I will send him email then .
I donn kno.
Me myslf been away
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This is dope
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Incredible metaphors and imagery altogether.
Love this a lot. 🙂
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wow poetic expression in true sense
i must say you write beautifully
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Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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WoW!!! This is amazing & beautiful.
I’ve seen you writing mostly over nature but this is different and lovely.
Keep writing & smiling 🙂
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You have some of the best poetry I’ve read in some years. I’ve been looking for more poetry like yours that inspires me and makes me think. Thank you!! Keep on writing!
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you sing the lullaby of metaphors! 🙂 nice 🙂
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not better than u :- )
take care
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Thank you so much Jyotee jee, for sharing the information too.
I don’t know how to praise people/compliments even if I want to. ‘Thank you soooo much’ is all I do. 🙂
Thanks again.
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Wow
Such a beautiful rhyme.
Thank you too Aditya jee
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