Before it rises!!!
And rise the Sun
From the glittery eyes
So I rise
Before my rise!!
Or the Sun rises
Before the Sun-rises
Unless I rise
A new RISE
A new season
A new reason
A new beginning
A new hope
That the day gives a “new’’ to me
The morning promises me
To give him a new day
I promise morning
And smile!
We stare at each-other
As I scatter inside the hope
And a hope scatters inside
Wakes up with me
And the morning
Every day I wake up
#Bottom-to-top!
#poetry-addiction
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Look at you Jyotee! This is just awesome! 🙂
P.S. All ll done with those tests?
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I love how you describe the morning as a new beginning. 🙂
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cheerful
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Lovely write. Good work
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you made my morning…lovely
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Nice one Jyotee ji.
But Where is Your Like Button?
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Thank you Sagar ji!
Really! like button isn”t showin?
I see!
Gday. keep smiling
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Thank you so muchh Akhila!
and ur words made MY day!
love
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Thank you so much Andrew!
I m honoured!
smiling
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Thank you so much writer friend!
Feeling glad
; )
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You’re Welcome Jyotee ji
Then Change You’re Theme.
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Thanks a lot Isabella.
have a gr8 day
love
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smiling!
Thank you so muchh Dajena!
Yeah! I m trying to keep myslf optimistic!
Nay! not started yet!
love
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Gracious!
Tenga un biun dia
; )
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hmm yah!
Thank you so much!
: )
keep smilin
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Again Welcome Jyotee ji,U 2.
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smile
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I’m so sorry , my friend … I mistakenly clicked ‘spam’ on your comment on my scribble ‘apology’ … an honest mistake and a thousand apologies
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smiling!
No big deal, my friend!
This happens!
We are humans afterall
smile!
✌
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smiling 😊✌
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So obviously I read it in reverse order until I reached the end and saw the tags. What a fabulous idea! A lovely poem that’s full of hope and promises 😍 Super LIKE!
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Thank you so much dear friend
yeah!
while I was writing it stroke in my mind!
Kind of weird though.
A reverse direction!
Thanks for noticing
love from Nepal
: )
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You’re a genius! It turned out real well 😀
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Amazing poetry
God bless u always 💐💐
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Thank you so muchh Marine!
: )
Keep smiling
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Thanks my friend
✋✌😊
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aww!
u r so very kind!
Thank you so much
love
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Thanks for the hint – bottom up! I like the poem, whichever way I read it, but really from the ground lifting towards the sky is best. I think it would work much better in a book where you can see the whole poem and understand at a glance that it is meant to be climbed. Great idea, great poem.
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Amazing!
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Thank you so much Khaya
: )
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Thank you so much Trent : )
Thank you for saying those beautiful words! and catching the ryt direction of the poem.
Since it was about rise; it must start from bottom to top! I guess!
have a good day friend
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Heya, that was such a lovely article. I would love your feedbacks on my blogs as well. Ur feedbacks and comments will help me write better. I do hope u check it out and comment, like or follow me. It would mean a lot to me to get feedback from a brilliant and experienced blogger. You can click the link given below to see my most recent post.
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And I really like it top to bottom! Love the hope in it!
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I love the structure and the wording. Brilliant!
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Fabulous! Love it so much. i’d like to write a poem like that.
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Heartachingly beautiful poetry! Thank you for following my blog. Incredibly happy to reciprocate.
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Sorry, I’m logged in under my food writing blog name. You’re following my donotannoythewriter.wordpress.com blog. Apologies for any confusion!
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Its so refreshing Jyotee, even if I read it in afternoon 😀
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Positive woman, good
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Complicated style of writing
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yeah!
n interesting wen ur thoughts curl along with words!
gday ahead n thanks
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Good day to you as well ,most welcome
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😊
Thank you so much my friend!
: )
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Thank you so muchh Saransh
😊
so sweet of u
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awww I see
2 blogs!
great to find this one also
hope u r doin well
great day ahead friend
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thank you so muchh my friend
glad n honoured 😆😊
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thanks dear
how sweet
pls ping me back. wen u do one!
🌹💕😃
good day ahead
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thank you so much dear one!
How sweet words!
have a great weekned
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glad u liked.
thank you so muchh sweety!
stay loved
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🙂
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boyfriend you said?….o.k then
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As the wise man say
There is hope, everyday 🙂
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This is so great. You must be an awesome person.
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Thank you so much friend.
Smiling
Actually No.
I m not dat awesome!
Cheers!
: )
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Thank you so muchh for stopping by : )
and taking time to read.
i will be there for sure!
have a nice day and a nice weekned!
: )
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thank you so muchh dear friend.
glad u read.
honoured n hpy!!! : )
goodday
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Beautiful poem, radiant with optimism. Anand Bose from Kerala.
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Thank you so much for stopping by Anand
i m hounoured : )
have a great day ahead.
–Jyotee
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I’ve nominated you for the The real neat Blog award https://daisywillows.wordpress.com/2016/05/17/real-neat-art-by-rob-goldstein/
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thankyou so much daisy!
: )
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#goodmorning. You did well, yet again. I like the funky format.
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Wow..Beautiful poetries. Looking forward to read more of them.
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thank you so muchh friend : )
have a nice day!
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thanks my dear : )
keep smiling
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Will do.
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Let every morning be so to you, me and everyone.
Regards,
Shiva
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thank you so much for so good vibes Shiva!
glad n humbled
wishes n smiles
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I love your style!! Great imagination and very well written👌🏻
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