Prompt By http://thesecretkeeper.net/2016/03/14/weekly-writing-prompt-28/

Tanka (5 – 7 – 5 – 7 – 7)


I’m not cool, I’m cold

Wave of love makes me colder

Your eyes watch me “cool”

Your goodness stares my brightness

Truth is! I prevent Living!!!

44 thoughts on “Wave

  1. Good effort…fine result. By the way, I’m another Jonathan to add to your collection! One operates at whatever light one has…increasing in skills as we go. THAT’S for all of us here! Thanks for your “follow” of my blog, too. Good to make your acquaintance. I’ll just see what other goodies you have here! 🙂

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  2. Haha

    Dats ryt! I ve a sweet mate named Jonathan : p and u too r :p

    Thankyou so much for appreciating my work!

    I read ur last poem : )) dat was awesom #hope

    It feels so good having soooo creative n poetic mates here in wordpres!

    Its realy inspiring!



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