I stopped!
Before the life stopped me
And stabbed me at my back!
Now its my turn!
To stop the life
And stab the knife!
In-front of it’s eyes!!
I conspire for
You were living me so long!
And I will be living you there-after!!!
I stopped!
Before the life stopped me
And stabbed me at my back!
Now its my turn!
To stop the life
And stab the knife!
In-front of it’s eyes!!
I conspire for
You were living me so long!
And I will be living you there-after!!!
Good morning Jyotee – spiritual poem this morning, thank you
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good morning Bruce!
sending u good vibes!
: )
have a wonderful day
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Thank you! Climb a mountain for us today, J!
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Nicely said
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Well best of luck, live your life at your best nice poem
have a good day 🙂
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Ah! I love the picture you’ve painted with your poetic words, Jyotee! I especially like, “To stop the life and stab the knife.” How wonderful! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thank you so muchh Jonathan!
haha yah!
life is suchhh!
: )
keep smilin
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धन्यवाद साथी ।
शुभ-दिवस
हरपल सुन्दर रहाेस ।
: )
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Thanks my friend!
have a lovely day!
stay happy
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haha
For sure! Mt.Everest!
cheers!
: )
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I will do my best, you as well
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This is deep. I m not quite sure if I really understood but reading it, was amazing. 🙂
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This peom sparked the passion in my eyes .. like bang on wow !.
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Don’t forget to tell us what yu see!?
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Loving it again, as usually 😉
Passed you an Award https://kruidroermenietje.wordpress.com/beautiful-souls/awards/
XxX
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Profound conspiracy,beautiful work Jyoti!! Stab back life with words 🙂 शुभ -रात्री 😊
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Beautiful and strong 😉
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Intellectual conspiracy
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quite strong
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Beautiful poem Jyotee!
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Thank you so muchh Dhiraj!
: )
good evenin
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Thanks my friend!
I appreciate that! : )
have a lovely day
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Thank you so much Binu!
u r so kind n humble : )
keep smilin
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Thank you so much annicaaktiv!
u r so kind n humble : )
keep smilin
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Good Evening Jyotee 🙂
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धन्यवाद । प्रशान्त ।
yeah!
alwz trying to stab!
शुभ-रात्री
: )
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Thank you so muchh my friend!
Will b visiting soon!
keep smiling : )
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haha
sure sure!
: )
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thank you so much Kanika!
love ur presence n support here!
stay happy!
: )
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Thank you so much Mate!
Glad u read n stopped by!
lots of wishes n peace
: )
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This is wonderful,its great to converse in hindi और बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद award nomination के लिये;surprisingly I found increase in readers after that…keep writing & smiling 🙂 शुभ-रात्री 😄🙏
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glad to know that my friend!
: )
हरपल सुखमय हाेस् ।
: )
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Welcome dear …You too stay happy 🙂 love
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Same to you my friend 🙂
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Thanks so much 🙂
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you too 🙂
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I really enjoy reading your blog so I’ve nominated you for a Liebster Award!
Check out the award here: https://lifesfinewhine.wordpress.com/2016/06/29/the-liebster-award-2/
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gooday friend : only a question , why indenting the lines in poetry , is it a metrics or metric-like shape ? … ciao, rinaldo.
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Wonderful verses! 😀
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“In-front of it’s eyes!!
I conspire for
You were living me so long!
And I will be living you there-after!!!”
Love it 😀
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Thank you so much Daniel !
love your presence here : )
hope u r doin good. thanks for appreciating my work!
good day : )
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thank you so much Ananya!
good evening ahead : )
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smiling!
ciao Rinaldo!
Ha!
No! It is the shape of my feelings : )
haha!
I m not good at maths as u! : )
pattern poetry is lovely
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You’re very welcome, Jyotee! 😀
Good evening to you, too!
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Thank you so much Pooja!
Glad abt u ; thinking abt me!
thanks dear. willl b visiting u soon!
hav a lovely evenin
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You’re welcome and have a great day 🙂
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dear friend , ciao~r.
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I’m glad to have time to visit your blog. In general I do not have time.
Hugs. Good day 🙂
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Reblogged this on Risque Bizness: Enter at Your Own Risque.
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I m so humbled and happy abt that!
Thank you so much my friend!
have a wonderful weekend! and a lovely day : )
hugs back!
💕
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Thank you so much dear one!
have a sweet day : )
💕
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Your style of poetry writing is a poetry in itself! This is a great piece of work, something to read at any time of the day to get you back in the spirit 🙂 – Michelle
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‘Conspiracy’ is a profound piece Jyotee…moreover its sharp the way u brought it out :D….excellent….keep posting my friend 😀
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Yeah!
I needed something to keep myself up:!
esp wen I m goin thru challenges or exms:
smiling!
Thank you tons Michelle!
Stay happy
cheers!
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Thank you so much my friend!
glad n honoured!
Yeah! bcoz we need a hope like thing
to keep goin onnnm
thanks
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Thanks dear
: )
✌
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You’re welcome
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I just love the way you write 👍☺
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Thank you so much sweety!
Keep smiling
Cheers
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Yes hope is mandatory 🙂
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