My dark soul, darkens my heart, darkens
my mind,
lead-ing
to a black
dark room where I feed the darkness, to all.
*I know, darkness is pain , that never ends!*
waiting,read never and red its ,bits in me Cut
be to
read
!read and
!feels read-ding & red-ding how me tell Don’t
*! ! traces in beats still that ,heart a have I For*
I consumed me, in hunger, I ruined me with my
anger
for breed
and bread!
i know, how losses are like! , and what grieving is!
*For I’ve been searching me, for ages! in despair!*
or silence-s having violence-s in ,me see don’t I
silence-s
of full
violence-s!
!sight no with,like is blind being what feel do I For
* PEACE the for rise to ,me for waiting is I Since*
And this ** makes me a HUMAN who still breaths for
The Humanity
Lives for
The Planet
With a dream to share a common & peaceful home
*Because I lost me and became homeless, in crowds!*
#–forward-backward–#
#PoetsForPeace
Written for:-
Inspired by:-
https://writingasitcomes.wordpress.com/2016/08/22/dawn/
Ah – Jyotee, good morning. This piece is FULL of emotion and savage cries….terrific. Thank you!
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Good morning to you Bruce!
( well; its a late afternoon)
Thank you so much my friend.
Each man is disturbed;
How can there be peace in the planet!
I wonder!
: )
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Close you eyes and think
what do you want
and try to be that
for a while
and so it will seer
your heart
with it
and so form
scar tissue
for your
tears.
Be good.
Bless and Namaste, Sweetheart!
B
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so wonderful poem sathi.. so true .. there has been no peace these days .so many turbulence inside ad outside world ..but we are still humans , and if we all live with kindness and love world would be better place
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Yeah!
This is so true!
Imaginations are most powerful
So are dreams!
Thank-you so much and
Namaste : )
Stay fine
Gday
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Wow!
Wat a lovely thing to say!
Yeah! I agree
And the world wud have been a better place!
Thank-you so much sathi.
Gday ahead!
: )
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Oh Jyotee, this pierces my heart and brings tears to my eyes… This is so deep, passionate, melancholic and real. Oh my! Jyotee, peace to you and blessings… I’m now inspired to write … perhaps. From my side of the world to yours, I send peace and blessings!
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Oh my Jonathan!
“The king of Spiritualism”
Wow!
Thank you so much my dearest! : )
Smiling!
Sounds good : ) π
Keep smiling
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Thank you for such a strong and potent piece. Have you added this to the comment section of forgottenmeadows blog?
Also,
***Future and previous contributors are asked to email mzanemcclellan@outlook.com giving permission along with name/url/location/ if you would like to be included in Praxis magazine.
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Oh. Wow.. This is powerful.
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Thank you so much lovely!
; )..
Stay happy
Gday
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Yes!
I did.
It was awaiting moderation!
Aha!
Sounds interesting! : )
Thank-you so very much Lubesh : )..
U r so kind n motivating!
: )
Gday ahead
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Thanks. I hope you have a fantastic day, too. π
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quoteogram.wordpress.com
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Wat a lovely quotes to start with : )
All the very best!
Gday
Thank you so much for dropping by
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Thank u very much mam.. Keep in touch
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Can i post as a guest author on your blog pl?
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Bonjour
Mes vacances sont terminΓ©es
Je viens faire un petit passage dans ton univers
Mais avant je veux te dire que
Tes petits messages sont comme la flamme d’un feu de bois
Qui dans mon cΕur , me mets de la joie
Ton amitiΓ© est une Γ©toile qui brille dans le ciel
Elle est Γ©ternelle
Passe une très bonne et belle journée
Gros bisous Bernard.
Je remercie tous ceux et toutes celles qui sont passΓ©es sur mon blog pendant le pΓ©riode de mes vacances
J’espΓ¨re que toi aussi tu as passΓ© un bon mois d’aout et que tu es en pleine forme
Bisous Bernard
Passe une très belle journée
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With darkness comes light β€
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???????????
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Hello Randeep!
Well;
I have never done this before and I haven’t posted anything beyond poetry!
But you may do! : ); if u are interested!
Cheers!
Take care
: )
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Indeed!
Wat a positive thing to say!
: )
Thank you lovely
Gday
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Oh wow!
Namaste : )
Thank-you so much Bernard for stopping by!
I think this is French.
Not sure though : )
I will try to explore this!
G’Day
Keep smiling
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A beaute as always. Missed your read outs.
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Omg cezane!
I missed u so much.
I searched for ur site also. Cudnot access!
Also asked zigyasa : )
How r u.
Takecare
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I missed you much more.
Missed being around your blog even more.
Iv been away, now in transition, healing.
I hope your doing great!
Lots of Love to you!
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Yes!
You are here.
I m so happy! : )
Stay connected by words always!
Lots of love to u : )
Take care
Keep smiling
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Thanks β€
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Piercing yet powerful!
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I have always loved the unutterable passion in poems, the desire of undesirable and vehemence in conveying of the dark. And Jyotee U had it all … wat a great poetess u are……keep Rocking ur readers π
Stay blessed π
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Hello Mr.Artist : )
Saaransh,
They say there is no peace in the planet.
There are losses and grieves and lots of things to lament for!
But while writing this poem, i explored “why?”
And wat i realised is…A human is a HUMAN, whether good or bad.
He cannot remain untouched by the humanity.
When there will be peace n satisfaction in each heart n soul. Only then the planet can restore peace n happiness!
What I meant to say is–
When each individual is disturbed n facing spiritual dis-satisfactions!, how can there be peace.
And for this, exploration of self-spiritualism and self conscious-ness and this can be earned and owned only through meditation and any stuffs that help us to find ourselves.
Alas!
This is so complicated
Sigh!
I am glad to have found you here.
Thanks
Take care
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Thank-you so much Khaya : )
Love your presence here!
Many thanks!
Have a wonderful weekend : )
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Thank you so much dear one : )
Keep smiling
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I am trying:)
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intense writing as always
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Thank you so much dear Anagha : )
I appreciate ur presence n words for my blog.
Thank you so much
Keep smiling
Stay blessed
Gday
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Wow, deep, dark and beautiful again…as always!
Keep writing dear! XxX
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Thank you so much dear!
So happy to see you around : )
Wat a kind person you are!
I will!
And also will keep reading you!
Thank you so much Patty!
Take care
Wishes from Nepal : )
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You make blush again π
Enjoy the rest of your weekend dear Y. XxX
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I agree….satisfaction is so rare among us….and meditation is the only way to it…one can use varied forms of meditation to achieve it, but sadly I dun see enough morality for self exploration.
The pleasure is always mine Jyotee…to go through ur amazing work and moreover ur thought process ….Take care ..have a great Sunday π
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Strong poetry here, such a nice work, keep writing, keep it growing,
have a good day ahead π
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Thank you so much my friend.
Glad that you stopped by and took ur tym to read the patterns.
Thank you so much for ur kind words.
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π
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It’s dark Jyoteeβ€π»
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I liked your blog, I invite you to my blog:
http://dishdessert.wordpress.com
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Hi!! Jyoti..i hope smiling poetess is doing good,this beyond beautiful &
I am fond of your writing styles & subject selection,this shows concern towards our planet as the world is short of peace and its good to see you as ambassador of peace via words.
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Ahaaaa…great….thanx for your likes my posts….and following me..π
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My writing is kind of opposite. But your blog kept me hooked. Amazing!
Following you!
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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Hello there friend!
Thank you so much for stopping by n liking my work.
I appreciate u being here.
Visiting you soon.
Keep smiling
Have a wonderful Sunday
Cheers
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Thanks buddy!
Gday
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Hello!
Well, your work deserves it!
Thank you so much for that.
Cheers π
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Thank you so much Sumit!
Missed ur posts!
Visiting you soon .
Keep smiling
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Thank you so much lovely.
I appreciate you being here!
Yes! I m visiting you asap
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Thankyou my dearest!
Hope u r doin good!
Having busy days! Sooooo…
Keep smiling ; )
Gday
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Thank you for being around Dheeraj Dave .
Its good to see u here!
Stay happy
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Thanks a tonnnns bud! : ).
Cheerful day ahead
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Welcome
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I am good & always had a smile everytime to see your words.Keep spreading smiles & have a great day ahead π
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My Plzure..
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Nominated u for the Versatile Blogger Award. Check my blog.
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You always write from your heart. That’s what makes your poems stand out.
Keep writing, Jyotee π
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Thank you so much Adarsha : )
Actually yes:!
I write wat I feel.no makeover !
thanks for being around dear!
takecare
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Thank you so much Shreya for thinking of my blog : )
well!
I ve many awards pending n I will try doin it someday!
I reallyhave busy days this month
and visiting u soon
takecare
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It is my pleasure, Jyotee π
I’ll always be hanging around in my corner of WordPress. Feel free to come around π
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Alright Darling. π
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Great work !
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Hiya Jyotee > really moving > I empathize totally with it, especially the last line. Hope up I are well
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I think we have all been in a dark place in our lives. I can’t imagine your pain, it must be terrible! I grew up in a world 100% opposite. My mom is my hero. She would send us off to school with a cheer. “It is going to be a great day”.
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Really love your concrete poetry!! Words and layout really awesome!! Makes me think! Thanks ππ
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Your descriptions are so specific,and Sublime.love it
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Lovely! I felt the emotion! I just wanted to say I liked the poem as well as the way it was written.
Cheers! ^_^
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