You showed me
How flowers bloomed without bitterness
The Sun rose without hatred
How thoughts could destroy human life
And expectations killed love
In my amusements to clouds and sky
You pointed out meanings of life
In my happiness with rain and rivers
You taught me to dive and come back
Because slowly I realized
I never came back and was lost
Inside rivers
Inside imaginations
Inside thoughts
Inside clouds
This is why my life had been so messy
I lived in some different world
I still do
But get electrified when I miss you
Your visions work like a catalyst
And rule my entire system !
My favorite line is: “In my amusements to clouds and sky”
Coz I can relate much to that 😊
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Great piece 🤘🏻
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Reblogged this on Mindfire Cantata.
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Thank you so much @Hanzhen
Glad you stoppd by n read.
:- )
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Thank you my dearest !
Keep smilin :- )
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hey! hy :- )
Seein u around, after so long.
Thank you so much dear
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Eh. Yeah. I eliminated social medua from my phone some months ago. WordPress has been added back, but the habit has been mostly broken. The list of things to do is perpetual… Feel ever so slightly guilty blogging but not making much time to read & disburse likes, BUT we must all take the steps that are best for us on each particular day; it is not possible to keep up with everything & everyone on every day. A perpetual and limitless slate of ToDos apparently is a continuous feature of growth & success – but must also build in time to tune out & play. The balancing is a lifetime practice and working. Have you considered downloading my ebook (free for the present)?
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I see.
Same here.
Stuck somewhere n nowhere!
Yeah! Balancing life is like a never ending process n yet unattainable.
But its so good to see u back.
Gimme the link!
Oh yay!
Congratulations on gettin published.
I m visiting ur site rather.
C’Ya
Take care
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This redirects to it: bit.ly/synapticebookfree ::: it is in fact self published. But this is also a great achievement. It was about the 8th manuscript i cut together, released under a different name on 1.1.2016, and extensively polished, edited reworked starting in fall, and learning all the tricks of getting the file formatted for BookBaby (clickable Table of Contents is key, which i dont think my earlier KDP version had; v v easy, once you know, just make titles H3s, section names H2s & dont bother writing a ToC; the software generates it). Whenever youre able, merely a star rating & 1 line review on any shop that sells it (are several, incl Kindle, iBooks, B&N, Kobo, more) or goodreads or wherever would be IMMENSELY helpful. Ive gotten no traction, so far, but my card on it last month was Geeeoooo the Slooooow (faeries oracle) eg ‘why are you in a hurry? The problem is part of a long process which cannot well be rushed’
Also, long link:
books.noisetrade.com/cooperdozier/synaptic-syntactic-of-unbounded
And i think i get 100% rather than a royalty (70% at Amazon, the devourer of businesses) whenever ppl buy direct @
store.bookbaby.com/book/synaptic-syntactic
Also, shortlink to that: bit.ly/synapticpoems
Also going to do some samples/flyers for friends and strangers to read, maybe print up & share (bulletin boards one way); i will let you know when i get them up. Thanks for listening!
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Hey! Jyoti..how are you doing, i hope everything is fine at your end.
Everytime i read something from your pen seems to be the best among i read, beautiful on words and lovely potray of emotions with the ingradients of nature.
Keep smiling & stay blessed😇
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My pleasure. Looking forward to reading more of your posts 😊
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Another marvelous piece Jyotee! Hope all is well with you, you busy girl 🙂
Big hug, XxX
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Outstanding poem. Gosh! do I miss reading your work. Glad you are back! Looking forward to more of your creative poetic flows. 🙂
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Thank you dear Charlie.
Hope you are fine.
Been busy.
Missed a lot from you.
Take care
keep smilin
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Thank you so much lovely.
Yeah! Kind of ” busy girl ” :- )
keep smling
Hugs back. XxX
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Astonishing….what a beautiful poem this is Jyotee.
U r a true talent …keep writing 🙂
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beautiful and heartwarming! thanks for sharing 🙂
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hy 🙂 i m soooooo away. hry?
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thank you aui
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Thank you for your consideration
See you on the other side of creativity As Sheldon Yoursly
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